Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
To be honest, I really like trusting with my friends, uh, talking with them make me relax in for your stress obstacles. Uh, we are Optus talk lots of interesting funnies, uh, talking about delays, uh, universities displaying and give each others advice when someone have a problem in one more.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
Yes of course I usually talk chatting with my friends because talking with them make me relax and forget stress. After school I can talk lots of things just is funny. School and university friends. I think testing is right where to build strong relationships and feel supported in life.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
To be honest, I really like taking wish my with our people in which only one friends because because it's make me relax, comfortable and forget forget stress for a long day. I think when we talk wish.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
Uh, e-mail opinion essay. Uh, I refer to communicating Kate face to face because it's easy to communicate, communicate and it's comfortable in convenient for everyone. Uh, I can go to the shopping, talk a lot of things.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Uh, I, I uh, up till argue with my friends because, uh, we are uh, say the same way things and I can't stop the story movers. I can we can, uh, talk. Everything's under distance show we are don't have argues with my friend.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể, có liên kết logic.
Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and reduce stress. We often talk about our daily lives, funny stories, and sometimes share advice when someone faces a problem.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.
Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily experiences, funny incidents, and school or university life. These conversations help us build strong relationships and feel supported.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho sự lựa chọn của mình.
Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable after a long day. One-on-one conversations are usually more personal and meaningful.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy tập trung vào việc giải thích lý do bạn thích giao tiếp trực tiếp hoặc qua mạng xã hội với các chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết ý tưởng bằng từ nối.
Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is easier and more comfortable. We can understand each other better and have more natural conversations.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ ràng về việc bạn có hay không hay lý do tại sao bạn không hay tranh cãi với bạn bè.
Ejemplo: I rarely argue with my friends because we usually understand each other's opinions. If we have different views, we try to discuss calmly and respect each other.
× I really like trusting with my friends
✓ I really like chatting with my friends
The verb 'like' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) to indicate an activity one enjoys. 'Trusting' is incorrect here because it means to have confidence in someone, not to chat or talk. The correct gerund is 'chatting'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× talking with them make me relax
✓ talking with them makes me relax
The subject 'talking' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. Using 'make' is incorrect because it is plural form. Correct subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical accuracy.
× make me relax in for your stress obstacles
✓ makes me relax and relieves my stress and obstacles
The phrase 'in for your stress obstacles' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression should convey that talking helps to relax and reduce stress. Using 'and relieves my stress and obstacles' clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition misuse.
× we are Optus talk lots of interesting funnies
✓ we often talk about lots of interesting and funny things
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Optus' is likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence uses proper adverbs and nouns to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.
× talking about delays, uh, universities displaying and give each others advice
✓ talking about daily life, university studies, and giving each other advice
The phrase 'delays, universities displaying' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses appropriate nouns and gerunds to express common topics of conversation. Also, 'each others' should be 'each other' without 's'.
× when someone have a problem in one more
✓ when someone has a problem or more
The subject 'someone' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'in one more' is unclear; 'or more' is a better expression to indicate multiple problems.
× I usually talk chatting with my friends
✓ I usually chat with my friends
The verb 'talk' should not be followed by another verb in -ing form here. 'Chat' is a verb that can be used directly. Using 'talk chatting' is redundant and incorrect.
× talking with them make me relax and forget stress
✓ talking with them makes me relax and forget stress
The singular subject 'talking' requires the singular verb 'makes' instead of 'make' to maintain subject-verb agreement.
× After school I can talk lots of things just is funny
✓ After school I can talk about lots of things that are just funny
The verb 'talk' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to topics. Also, 'just is funny' is ungrammatical; 'that are just funny' correctly modifies 'things'.
× I think testing is right where to build strong relationships and feel supported in life
✓ I think chatting is the right way to build strong relationships and feel supported in life
The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Testing' is likely a mishearing of 'chatting'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.
× I really like taking wish my with our people in which only one friends
✓ I really like talking with a group of people rather than only one friend
The phrase 'taking wish my with our people' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'talking' followed by the preposition 'with'. Also, 'friends' should be singular 'friend' when referring to 'only one'.
× because because it's make me relax, comfortable and forget forget stress
✓ because it makes me relaxed, comfortable, and helps me forget stress
The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Also, 'forget forget' is a repetition error. Using 'helps me forget' is clearer.
× I refer to communicating Kate face to face
✓ I prefer communicating face to face
The phrase 'refer to communicating Kate face to face' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'prefer communicating face to face'. 'Kate' is likely a mishearing or typo.
× it's easy to communicate, communicate and it's comfortable in convenient for everyone
✓ it's easy to communicate and comfortable and convenient for everyone
The repetition of 'communicate' is redundant. Also, 'comfortable in convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable and convenient'.
× I can go to the shopping, talk a lot of things
✓ I can go shopping and talk about a lot of things
The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'talk a lot of things' should be 'talk about a lot of things'.
× I, I uh, up till argue with my friends because, uh, we are uh, say the same way things
✓ I rarely argue with my friends because we usually see things the same way
'Up till argue' is incorrect; 'rarely argue' or 'don't often argue' is appropriate. Also, 'say the same way things' should be 'see things the same way'.
× I can't stop the story movers
✓ I can't stop the conversation from moving forward
The phrase 'story movers' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the intended meaning about continuing conversation.
× Everything's under distance show we are don't have argues with my friend
✓ Everything is fine, so we don't have arguments with my friends
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence expressing the intended meaning.