Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'when it's come to that'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: No, I don't enjoy chatting with friends online very much. Instead, I prefer focusing on my hobbies, such as learning new languages and baking. These activities help me challenge myself and improve in different ways.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to support your points.

Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our different hobbies and interests. I especially enjoy talking with people who feel shy because it helps me feel relaxed and encourages me to keep the conversation going.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but a bit long and repetitive. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating similar ideas. Keep your sentences concise and clear.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it feels less overwhelming. This way, I can enjoy conversations with everyone at once without the pressure to respond immediately to each person.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrasing like 'makes it impossible to someone to suppress'.

Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is harder for people to hide their true feelings. This way, you can better understand someone's real emotions.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but some sentences are awkward. Use linking words to connect ideas and express them more naturally. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'enduring way' and 'like notorious people'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but always respectfully. This helps us maintain a healthy friendship because we listen to each other's opinions and respect our differences.

× No, I don't really enjoy chatting with my friends online, and I tend to be more interested when it's come to that.

✓ No, I don't really enjoy chatting with my friends online, and I tend to be more interested when it comes to that.

The phrase 'when it's come to that' uses the past tense 'come' incorrectly. The correct present tense form is 'comes' because the phrase refers to a general situation, so 'when it comes to that' is correct.

× And that's how I impress myself, uh, in order to, uh, improve myself in many aspects in challenging myself.

✓ And that's how I impress myself, uh, in order to, uh, improve myself in many aspects by challenging myself.

The phrase 'in challenging myself' is incorrect because 'in' does not properly connect the action. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate the means of improvement.

× I usually chat with my friends about our diverse preference in our lives and such as our hobbies and interests.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our diverse preferences in our lives, such as our hobbies and interests.

The word 'preference' should be plural 'preferences' to agree with the plural subject 'our' and the context of multiple preferences.

× And mostly I chat with people who are uncomfortable with because that's really make me, uh, at ease and, uh, triggered me to continue the chat, uh, and that, which is really soothing me.

✓ And mostly I chat with people who I am comfortable with because that really makes me, uh, at ease and, uh, triggers me to continue the chat, uh, and that, which is really soothing me.

The phrase 'people who are uncomfortable with' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'people who I am comfortable with' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'that', and 'triggered' should be 'triggers' to maintain present tense.

× I actually prefer to communicate with others face to face and because this way makes it impossible to someone to suppress their true feelings without feigning it.

✓ I actually prefer to communicate with others face to face because this way it is impossible for someone to suppress their true feelings without feigning it.

The conjunction 'and because' is incorrect; 'because' alone is sufficient. Also, the phrase 'makes it impossible to someone' should be 'it is impossible for someone' for correct prepositional use.

× Yes, I do actually argue with my friends, but always in a respectful and enduring way without being like notorious people.

✓ Yes, I do actually argue with my friends, but always in a respectful and enduring way without being like notorious people.

No correction needed for this sentence as it fits the grammar problem types list.

× In this way makes us have a healthy friendship without dismissing someone's opinion and allows us to respect our differences.

✓ In this way, it helps us have a healthy friendship without dismissing someone's opinion and allows us to respect our differences.

The sentence lacks a subject before 'makes'. Adding 'it helps' clarifies the subject and corrects the sentence structure.