Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Yes, I really like to chatting with them. I if I have free time I will transfer them to tell my story of my school. How about today and ask them did them stay here or something like that Sometime I ask them to go out with me it's.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
I usually just with my friend to tell about some story about my school, my school friends or sometime I ask I chat with him to invite them go to my even my party or sometime go out eat together.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
Umm, both are good, but I keen on just only one friends because I don't have much friends. I have some close friends, uh, and the best, uh, the best I will charge is uh, my best friend. So I keen on just with one friend more than.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
I refer to communicate face to face with them than via social media because meet them in person I can tell some story with more emotion and they will I will know how they reaction my stories.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Yeah, sometimes because we sometimes we don't understand together so and some.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'to chatting' và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp lại và câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. Whenever I have free time, I like to share stories about my school day and ask them about theirs. Sometimes, I also invite them to go out with me.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề trò chuyện.
Ejemplo: I usually chat with my friends about stories from school, our classmates, or sometimes I invite them to my parties or to go out for a meal together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp như 'prefer' thay vì 'keen on' trong ngữ cảnh này. Ngoài ra, hãy sắp xếp câu hợp lý và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như 'charge'.
Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I have only a few close friends. I feel more comfortable sharing with my best friend.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I refer to communicate'. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc. Cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và chính xác.
Ejemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because meeting in person allows me to express emotions better and see their reactions clearly.
Do you argue with friends?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không rõ ràng, có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu ý cụ thể. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời đầy đủ và mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we misunderstand each other. For example, we might disagree about plans or opinions, but we usually resolve it quickly.
× Yes, I really like to chatting with them.
✓ Yes, I really like chatting with them.
The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form '-ing' rather than the infinitive 'to'. Therefore, 'to chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting'. This is a common error when using verbs that are followed by gerunds.
× I if I have free time I will transfer them to tell my story of my school.
✓ If I have free time, I will tell them the story of my school.
The original sentence has incorrect word order and an incorrect verb 'transfer'. The correct structure is a conditional sentence starting with 'If I have free time,' followed by the main clause. 'Transfer' is not appropriate here; 'tell' is the correct verb to express sharing a story.
× How about today and ask them did them stay here or something like that
✓ I ask them if they stayed here today or something like that.
The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. The correct form uses 'ask them if' to introduce a question, and 'did them stay' is incorrect; it should be 'they stayed' for proper subject-verb agreement and tense.
× Sometime I ask them to go out with me it's.
✓ Sometimes I ask them to go out with me.
The sentence ends abruptly with 'it's' which is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct.
× I usually just with my friend to tell about some story about my school, my school friends or sometime I ask I chat with him to invite them go to my even my party or sometime go out eat together.
✓ I usually just chat with my friends to tell stories about my school and my school friends, or sometimes I chat with them to invite them to my events or parties, or sometimes to go out and eat together.
The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Just with my friend' should be 'chat with my friends'. 'Invite them go' should be 'invite them to go'. Also, 'even my party' is corrected to 'events or parties' for clarity. Proper prepositions and plural forms are used for correctness.
× I keen on just only one friends because I don't have much friends.
✓ I am keen on just only one friend because I don't have many friends.
'Friends' is plural, so 'one friends' is incorrect; it should be 'one friend'. Also, 'much friends' is incorrect; 'many friends' is used with countable nouns like 'friends'. The verb 'am' is added for correct sentence structure.
× I have some close friends, uh, and the best, uh, the best I will charge is uh, my best friend.
✓ I have some close friends, and the best one I will choose is my best friend.
The phrase 'the best I will charge' is incorrect; 'charge' is not appropriate here. The correct verb is 'choose'. Also, 'the best one' clarifies the subject. Filler words like 'uh' are omitted for clarity.
× So I keen on just with one friend more than.
✓ So I am keen on just one friend more than others.
The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. 'I keen on' should be 'I am keen on'. 'Just with one friend more than' is incomplete; adding 'others' completes the comparison.
× I refer to communicate face to face with them than via social media because meet them in person I can tell some story with more emotion and they will I will know how they reaction my stories.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with them rather than via social media because when I meet them in person, I can tell stories with more emotion and I will know their reactions to my stories.
The verb 'refer to' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer'. 'Than' is used for comparison, so 'rather than' is more appropriate. 'Meet them in person' needs 'when' to connect the clause. 'They will I will know' is incorrect; it should be 'I will know their reactions'. Prepositions and sentence connectors are corrected for clarity.
× Yeah, sometimes because we sometimes we don't understand together so and some.
✓ Yeah, sometimes because we don't always understand each other.
The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'Don't understand together' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'don't understand each other'. The sentence is simplified and corrected for proper present tense and clarity.