Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid grammatical errors such as 'This app help me' which should be 'These apps help me'. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to make your answer more coherent and natural. Keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: I really enjoy chatting with my friends through WhatsApp and other social media platforms because these apps help me stay connected even when we are far apart. They also allow us to easily share our daily experiences, so I can maintain close relationships despite our busy schedules.

Sugerencia: Be careful with article usage, for example, 'the a new comedy film' should be 'a new comedy film'. Also, try to use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Providing specific examples is good, but make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear.

Ejemplo: My friends and I usually chat about fashion and the latest trends in makeup because we enjoy trying new styles. We also talk about movies and decide which ones to watch together on weekends. For instance, last week we discussed a new comedy film that just came out and planned to see it soon.

Sugerencia: Start your answer with a clear topic sentence. Also, use plural forms correctly, for example, 'opinions' instead of 'opinion'. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to contrast ideas. Try to avoid short, incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend when the topic is private and related to my personal life because it feels more comfortable and confidential. However, for public matters or current events, I enjoy talking with a group to hear different opinions and ideas.

Sugerencia: Remember to use correct verb forms, for example, 'prefer to communicate' instead of 'prefer communicate'. Also, avoid repeating words like 'emotional emotions'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal and natural. When we spend too much time on social media, we can become shy or awkward in real-life conversations since we are used to talking behind a screen. Therefore, face-to-face communication is more effective for building strong relationships and understanding emotions better.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear expressions. Use simple and clear sentences to express your ideas. For example, say 'I don't argue with my friends, but sometimes we have different points of view which we discuss calmly.' Practice organizing your thoughts before speaking to improve fluency and clarity.

Ejemplo: I don't argue with my friends, but sometimes we have different points of view. We discuss these calmly and always end the conversation in a friendly way.

× This app help me stay connected with them even when we are far apart, and they allow us to easily share our daily experience.

✓ This app helps me stay connected with them even when we are far apart, and it allows us to easily share our daily experiences.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'app'. Similarly, 'they' is incorrect because 'app' is singular; it should be 'it'. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the context of multiple daily events.

× This app help me stay connected with them even when we are far apart, and they allow us to easily share our daily experience.

✓ This app helps me stay connected with them even when we are far apart, and it allows us to easily share our daily experiences.

The noun 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' because it refers to multiple daily events shared among friends.

× Most of the time, my friends and I chat about fashion and the latest trend in makeup because we all enjoy trying new, exciting styles.

✓ Most of the time, my friends and I chat about fashion and the latest trends in makeup because we all enjoy trying new, exciting styles.

The phrase 'latest trend' should be plural 'latest trends' because it refers to multiple current styles in makeup.

× For example, last week we discussed the a new comedy film that just came out and planned to see it each other day.

✓ For example, last week we discussed a new comedy film that just came out and planned to see it the next day.

The phrase 'the a new' is incorrect; only one article should be used, so 'a new' is correct. Also, 'each other day' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'the next day' to indicate the following day.

× Topic is private and related to my personal life.

✓ The topic is private and related to my personal life.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'The' before 'topic' to form a complete and correct sentence.

× However, if the conversation is about public matters or current event, I enjoy talking with a group of people to hear different opinion and ideas.

✓ However, if the conversation is about public matters or current events, I enjoy talking with a group of people to hear different opinions and ideas.

The noun 'event' should be plural 'events' to match 'matters'. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' because multiple views are expected.

× For me, I definitely prefer communicate face to face because it feels more personal and natural.

✓ For me, I definitely prefer communicating face to face because it feels more personal and natural.

After the verb 'prefer', the gerund form 'communicating' is required, not the base form 'communicate'.

× Sometimes when we spend too much time on social media, we become a bit shy or awkward in real life conversation since we are used to talking behind the screen.

✓ Sometimes when we spend too much time on social media, we become a bit shy or awkward in real-life conversation since we are used to talking behind the screen.

The phrase 'real life conversation' should be hyphenated as 'real-life conversation' to function as a compound adjective.

× Therefore, I believe that face to face communication is more effective for building strong relationship and understanding emotional emotions better.

✓ Therefore, I believe that face-to-face communication is more effective for building strong relationships and understanding emotions better.

The phrase 'strong relationship' should be plural 'strong relationships' to generalize the concept. Also, 'emotional emotions' is redundant; 'emotions' alone is sufficient. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'.

× I don't think we are argue, but sometimes we discuss, uh, in different, uh, points of view from my respective, I see you can say I precede the 9:00 and 6:00, so they see the six as 9.

✓ I don't think we argue, but sometimes we discuss different points of view. From my perspective, I see you can say I perceive the 9:00 and 6:00, so they see the six as 9.

The phrase 'we are argue' is incorrect; it should be 'we argue'. 'In different, uh, points of view from my respective' is unclear and should be 'different points of view. From my perspective'. 'Precede' is incorrect; the correct word is 'perceive'.

× But I think, no, it's not argue.

✓ But I think, no, it's not an argument.

The phrase 'it's not argue' is incorrect; it should be 'it's not an argument' to use the noun form correctly.

× It's only a conversation and discussion, uh, since it will end, uh, in a friendly way.

✓ It's only a conversation and discussion since it will end in a friendly way.

The filler words 'uh' should be removed for clarity and correctness.