Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I'm chatting with friends could make me feel better". Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially in the evenings when I have free time. Talking with them helps me feel relaxed and happy.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và chính tả từ "conservation" thành "conversation". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để nối các ý.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about basketball since it's our favorite sport, discussing how to play better and improve our skills. Besides that, we also chat about food and movies.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để làm câu rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, chú ý chia động từ đúng và tránh lặp từ.

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood. When I'm feeling down and want a deep conversation, I prefer chatting with one friend. But if I have happy stories, I like to chat with a group.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "they're really hard to choose one" và "when I met him". Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu và sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen.

Ejemplo: It's hard to choose, but I prefer face-to-face communication because I can express my emotions clearly and also see others' feelings.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên dùng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "it's the good way". Hãy thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, we do argue sometimes, but I believe that arguing is a good way to understand each other better.

× I'm chatting with friends could make me feel better and relaxed.

✓ Chatting with friends can make me feel better and relaxed.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm chatting' which is present continuous and does not fit the intended meaning. The correct form is the gerund 'Chatting' as the subject of the sentence, and 'could' should be replaced with 'can' to express general ability or effect.

× we usually have conservation about how to play basketball and how to improve my skill.

✓ we usually have conversations about how to play basketball and how to improve my skills.

The word 'conservation' is incorrect; the correct word is 'conversations'. Also, 'about' is the correct preposition to use with 'conversations'. Additionally, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context.

× how to improve my skill.

✓ how to improve our skills.

Since the conversation is about a group activity, 'my' should be replaced with 'our' to reflect shared skills among friends.

× when I have happy story or something like that I will prefer chat with a group.

✓ when I have a happy story or something like that, I will prefer to chat with a group.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'happy story'. Also, 'prefer chat' should be 'prefer to chat' to use the correct verb form after 'prefer'.

× For me, they're really hard to choose one, but if I have to choose, I will choose face to face communication because when I met him face to face, I can show my emotion and see the emotion too.

✓ For me, it's really hard to choose one, but if I have to choose, I will choose face-to-face communication because when I meet him face to face, I can show my emotions and see his emotions too.

The phrase 'they're really hard' is incorrect; it should be 'it's really hard' referring to the choice. 'Met' should be 'meet' to maintain present tense. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' and 'see the emotion' should be 'see his emotions' for clarity.

× Moreover, I think that face to face communication is.

✓ Moreover, I think that face-to-face communication is better.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a predicate. Adding 'better' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, of course we usually have arguments with each other, but for me I think when we argue it's the good way to know about each other.

✓ Yes, of course we usually have arguments with each other, but for me, I think when we argue it's a good way to get to know each other.

The phrase 'the good way' should be 'a good way' as it is a general statement. Also, 'know about each other' is better expressed as 'get to know each other' for natural English usage.