Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 文法と語順の誤りを直し、発想を明確に伝える練習をしましょう。具体的には、主語・動詞の一致、冠詞の使い方、語の省略や誤用（例："uni home"）を正し、短く一貫した文を作ること。さらに、詳細を一つ加える（制服の種類や理由）と内容が豊かになります。

Ejemplo: Yes. Students at my school must wear a uniform. We wear a blazer, a white shirt and black shoes when we come to school, which helps create a sense of unity.

Sugerencia: 考えをはっきりしたトピック文で示し、理由を一つか二つの具体例で支えましょう。語彙（responsibility, independence）の使い方と文法（不定詞や名詞形）の誤りを直し、接続詞でつなげて論理的に話す練習を。

Ejemplo: I don't think more rules would help. Instead, students should learn responsibility and independence, because this encourages critical thinking and better decision-making.

Sugerencia: 意味が不明瞭な表現（"debut themselves"）を避け、教師の態度や行動を具体的に説明しましょう。否定の場合も代替案や具体例（どういう点で熱心ではなかったか）を一文で付けると良いです。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't. The teachers I had were often not very involved; they rarely offered extra help or showed enthusiasm for students' progress.

Sugerencia: 主張を明確にし、語法（self-motivated, make decisions, not to harm）と語順を修正しましょう。理由は一つに絞り、具体的な例（どんな自由が生徒の責任感を育てるか）を加えると説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: I prefer fewer rules because students become more self-motivated. For example, when they choose their projects freely, they learn to take responsibility and respect others' rights.

Sugerencia: 答えが不完全で不明瞭です。まず主語をはっきり示し、厳しかった具体的な行動や効果（例：規律を守らせるが生徒の反発を招いた）を一つ加えて五文以内にまとめましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a strict teacher in high school. He enforced punctuality and silence in class, which improved discipline but sometimes made students feel anxious.

Sugerencia: 理由を簡潔に述べ、文法（"do from school"など）を正しましょう。不利な点だけでなく、どうすれば管理できるかという建設的な意見を一文加えると良いです。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使って論理を整えてください。

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't. In a rule-free school many students might behave badly, and I would find it difficult to manage the class; therefore, I prefer a school with clear but fair rules.

× Yes, students have to wear school uniform in my school.

✓ Yes, students have to wear a school uniform at my school.

The sentence needs an article before 'school uniform' and the preposition 'at' is more natural for location. Use 'a school uniform' to indicate the required set of clothes; 'at my school' fixes preposition use.

× When students commute to the school, they have to wear uni home and shoes that.

✓ When students commute to school, they have to wear their uniform and shoes.

Use 'commute to school' without 'the' for general statement. 'Uni home and shoes that' is incorrect word order and words; replace with 'their uniform and shoes' and put pronoun 'their' to show possession.

× I don't think so. Students should have responsibility or independent to to. Follow the rules.

✓ I don't think so. Students should be responsible and independent and follow the rules.

Use 'should be' + adjective for states: 'be responsible' and 'independent'. Remove duplicate 'to' and join actions with 'and'. The noun 'responsibility' is replaced with adjective 'responsible' to match 'be'.

× No, I've never had a really dedicated teacher. They didn't debut themselves to students.

✓ No, I've never had a really dedicated teacher. They didn't devote themselves to the students.

Use the verb 'devote' not 'debut'. 'Devote' in past tense is 'devoted', but keeping 'didn't devote' is acceptable; better: 'didn't devote themselves to the students'. 'The students' specifies the group.

× I prefer to have fewer rules at school because students should self motivated and make their decision to not to harm other people.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because students should be self-motivated and make decisions that do not harm other people.

Use 'be self-motivated' (adjective with 'be'), plural 'decisions' for generality, and 'that do not harm' is correct clause. Remove extra 'to'.

× UH was always strict for students and they.

✓ He/She was always strict with students.

Sentence is fragmented. Replace 'UH' with appropriate subject 'He' or 'She' and use 'strict with students'. Remove trailing 'and they' or complete thought if needed.

× I don't want to work as a teacher and do from school because in these kinds of school many students behave badly and I can't manage these students.

✓ I don't want to work as a teacher at a school like that because many students behave badly and I wouldn't be able to manage them.

Use 'at a school like that' for clarity, 'wouldn't be able to manage' matches hypothetical preference, and replace 'these kinds of school' with 'a school like that'. 'Do from school' is ungrammatical and removed.