Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary phrases, and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. Usually I shop for shoes a few times a year, mainly at the start of each season. I also sometimes buy shoes impulsively when I see a style I like while shopping, because I prefer items that fit both my needs and current trends.

Sugerencia: Give a concise, well-structured answer: state clearly that you have bought online and provide one specific example with brief details about the experience. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense and word choice (e.g., 'available online', 'I ordered it').

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online. For example, last month I ordered a pair of Kusa sneakers that were only available on the retailer’s website, and they arrived quickly. The quality was good and there were no problems with scams or counterfeit items, so I was satisfied with the purchase.

Sugerencia: Be precise and use correct grammar and numbers. Start with a clear statement about typical spending, then qualify exceptions. Use linking words (e.g., 'usually', 'however') and avoid unclear phrases like 'I have how much money I spend.'

Ejemplo: It depends, but usually I spend about 10,000 to 15,000 (local currency) on a good pair of shoes. However, if I really like a particular design I might spend more. Overall, my average expenditure is around 10–15K per pair.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference and then explain with one specific example. Reduce hesitations and repetition; use linking words like 'for example' and 'however' to make your answer coherent. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes for everyday use, but I choose fashionable shoes for special occasions. For example, I wear stylish dress shoes to weddings and meetings, while I opt for sneakers or loafers for casual outings because they are more comfortable.

× Yes, I like buying shoes and it depend on the situation because sometime I just want almost seasonal issues and sometime I just want to when I go to the market where I can buy if I like the shoes. So yes I like to buying shoes.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes and it depends on the situation because sometimes I want shoes for a particular season and sometimes I buy them when I go to the market and find a pair I like. So yes, I like buying shoes.

Errors: verb agreement ('it depend' -> 'it depends') and adverb/adjective forms ('sometime' -> 'sometimes'); noun misuse ('seasonal issues' -> 'shoes for a particular season'); incorrect verb form after 'like' ('like to buying' -> 'like buying'). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement in present tense by adding -s for he/it/that; use 'sometimes' for frequency; choose correct noun phrases (e.g., 'shoes for a particular season'); after 'like' use infinitive without 'to' or gerund appropriately ('like buying').

× Yes I bought the shoes online. For example last month I just bought a a KUSA which is just available on the online and I just order it and the quality was very good and there is not any fake and scam issues I received.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online. For example, last month I bought a pair of KUSA shoes that are only available online; I ordered them and the quality was very good. I did not encounter any fake products or scams.

Errors: articles and word order ('the shoes' -> 'shoes' or 'a pair of KUSA shoes'), double article and unnecessary 'a a'; incorrect preposition ('on the online' -> 'online'); tense consistency and auxiliary usage ('I just order it' -> 'I ordered it'); negative construction ('there is not any fake and scam issues I received' -> 'I did not encounter any fake products or scams'). Suggestion: use past simple consistently for completed actions, correct prepositions ('online'), avoid duplicate articles, and use clear negative forms ('did not encounter').

× Well it depends on the situation because when I like some shoes then I have no issue. I have how much money I spend but if I talk about usually and then I usually spend almost 10 to 15 K to buying the shoes.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation because when I really like a pair of shoes, I will spend what is needed. Generally, I usually spend about 10 to 15 K on shoes.

Errors: awkward sentence structure and missing words ('I have how much money I spend' is unclear); incorrect preposition/infinitive ('to buying' -> 'on shoes'); tense and adverb placement ('if I talk about usually' is redundant). Suggestion: make sentences concise and logical: state condition then result, use 'spend X on shoes', and keep adverbs ('usually', 'generally') in natural positions. Use 'a pair of shoes' for countable reference.

× Uh, well, it's depend on the situation because sometime I just prefer to wear, uh, fashionable shoes.

✓ Uh, well, it depends on the situation because sometimes I prefer to wear fashionable shoes.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('it's depend' -> 'it depends') and adverb form ('sometime' -> 'sometimes'); redundant filler words. Suggestion: use correct verb form for third-person singular present, and use 'sometimes' to indicate frequency; remove unnecessary fillers for clarity.

× For example, if I'm going to the, uh, attending marriage, then I, I want to prefer the fashionable shoes.

✓ For example, if I'm attending a wedding, then I prefer fashionable shoes.

Errors: incorrect noun phrase ('attending marriage' -> 'attending a wedding'); unnecessary auxiliary verbs and verb choice ('I want to prefer' -> 'I prefer'); article use ('a wedding'). Suggestion: use standard collocations ('attend a wedding'), use simple present to express preference, and avoid redundant verbs ('want to prefer' is incorrect).

× But if, uh, but I'm, I'm like in casual days, I just want to prefer comfortable shoes, which I feel like more comfortable.

✓ But on casual days, I prefer comfortable shoes because they feel more comfortable.

Errors: redundant conjunctions ('But if, uh, but'), awkward phrasing ('I'm like in casual days' -> 'on casual days'), incorrect verb choice ('want to prefer' -> 'prefer'), and comparative redundancy ('feel more comfortable' is fine but remove 'like'). Suggestion: simplify to 'on casual days, I prefer...', avoid filler words, and use direct comparative structures when necessary.