Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and simplify your response. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like buying shoes and how often (e.g., weekly/monthly). Then add one or two specific supporting details (why you buy shoes and when). Use correct tenses and avoid long unclear phrases. Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and I usually buy them every few months. I find shopping for shoes relaxing because trying different styles helps me unwind. For example, I often visit shops on the weekend when I have free time.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then one or two clear details about when and why you buy online. Avoid vague or incorrect words (e.g., "pasta time") and use correct past tense when describing the last purchase. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to show cause.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and helps me relax in the evening. For example, I usually browse stores before bed and I bought a pair last week from a popular website.

Sugerencia: Respond with a clear range and explain factors that change the price. Use precise numbers and correct grammar (e.g., "around 100" not "turn to 100"). Use linking words ("however", "if", "for example") to organize details. One or two sentences are enough.

Ejemplo: It depends on the type of shoes; for everyday shoes I usually spend around $50 to $100 per pair. However, if I buy big brands like Adidas I might pay $120 or more for one pair.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a balanced opinion with specific situations. Use present simple for habits and correct sentence structure. Use linking words like "but" or "however" to contrast preferences in different situations. Keep it concise: one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence with an example.

Ejemplo: It depends, but I generally choose comfortable shoes for daily use because I spend a lot of time walking or studying. However, when I go out with friends or to special events I prefer fashionable shoes to look stylish.

× Yes, I'm really fond of buying shoes and the last time I buy I bought my shoes in a bit more than the mixed one.

✓ Yes, I'm really fond of buying shoes, and the last time I bought shoes I bought a pair that cost a bit more than my usual ones.

Pronoun and reference are unclear ('the mixed one' incorrect). Also tense 'buy I bought' is incorrect sequence; use past 'bought'. Replace vague 'the mixed one' with 'my usual ones' for clear reference. Use a comma before coordinating conjunction linking two independent clauses. Suggestion: refer clearly to what 'the mixed one' means and keep past tense consistent when describing a past purchase.

× I usually buy shoes on the amount.

✓ I usually buy shoes when I need them.

'On the amount' is not a correct English quantifier phrase. The idea likely intended is frequency or condition: 'when I need them' or 'occasionally'. Use clear quantifiers or frequency expressions (e.g., often, sometimes, when I need them).

× This is because I think it made me feel relaxed and I'm really enjoy it.

✓ This is because I think it makes me feel relaxed and I really enjoy it.

Tense and verb form errors: 'made' (past) conflicts with present general statement; use present 'makes'. Also 'I'm really enjoy it' mixes 'be' + verb incorrectly; use simple present 'I really enjoy it' or 'I'm really enjoying it' depending on continuous sense. Use consistent present tense for habits. Suggestion: For habits, use simple present (makes, enjoy).

× Yes, I'm fond of buying shoes online, especially when I'm before I go to bed because it's a pasta time for me and I can release my stress at that time.

✓ Yes, I'm fond of buying shoes online, especially before I go to bed because it's a pastime for me and I can relieve my stress at that time.

Preposition/word choice errors: 'when I'm before I go to bed' is redundant; use 'before I go to bed'. 'Pasta time' is incorrect word choice; correct term is 'pastime'. 'Release my stress' is awkward; use 'relieve my stress' or 'relax'.

× The last time I go to I go to stuff online was the last day yesterday, yeah.

✓ The last time I bought something online was yesterday.

Tense and word choice errors: use simple past 'bought' for a completed action. Remove redundant phrasing 'the last day yesterday' and incorrect repetition 'I go to I go to stuff'. Use 'something' instead of 'stuff' for a single purchase. Suggestion: Use simple past for completed past actions and avoid repetition.

× While it depends if we are want to buy a common shoes I would pay turn to 100 a pair of shoes.

✓ If we want to buy common shoes, I would pay around 100 per pair.

Sentence structure and agreement problems: 'While it depends if we are want to buy' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'If we want to buy'. 'a common shoes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'common shoes' or 'a common pair of shoes'. 'pay turn to 100' is incorrect phrasing; use 'pay around 100' and 'a pair' or 'per pair'. Suggestion: Keep conditional clauses simple and ensure noun-article agreement.

× If I would buy some big brands of shoes I may pay more like Adidas who are like and so on.

✓ If I buy big-brand shoes, I may pay more, for example for Adidas and other brands.

Incorrect conditional: use 'If I buy' (zero/first conditional) rather than 'If I would buy'. 'Big brands of shoes' is better as 'big-brand shoes' or 'name-brand shoes'. 'Adidas who are like and so on' is ungrammatical; use 'for example Adidas and other brands.' Suggestion: Use proper conditional structure and clear examples.

× Why? It depends.

✓ Why? It depends.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. 'It depends' correctly uses third person singular verb 'depends'. No grammatical error.

× Sometimes I may prefer fashionable shoes. For example, if I will go out to play with others, I'm all go to a big mall.

✓ Sometimes I may prefer fashionable shoes. For example, if I go out to play with others, I will go to a big mall.

Incorrect use of 'will' in the if-clause: in first conditional and general real situations, use present simple in the 'if' clause ('if I go') and 'will' or present simple in the main clause. Also 'I'm all go to a big mall' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'I will go to a big mall' or 'I usually go to a big mall.' Suggestion: Use present tense in conditional 'if' clauses and a clear main clause verb.

× To shopping, I may try all my fashionable shoes.

✓ When shopping, I may try on all my fashionable shoes.

Incorrect verb form and preposition: 'To shopping' should be 'When shopping' or 'On shopping trips'. 'Try all my fashionable shoes' should be 'try on' (phrasal verb) to indicate putting shoes on to test them. Suggestion: Use 'try on' for clothing/shoes and correct introductory phrase 'When shopping'.

× If I am at home or stay to study, I may choose a comfortable shoes because it's comfortable.

✓ If I am at home or staying to study, I may choose comfortable shoes because they are comfortable.

Pronoun and agreement issues: 'stay to study' is incorrect; use 'staying to study'. 'a comfortable shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'shoes'; use 'comfortable shoes'. 'it's comfortable' refers to shoes (plural), so use 'they are comfortable'. Suggestion: Ensure verb forms match ('staying') and pronoun number agreement between noun and pronoun.