Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations, repetition, and grammatical errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement and tense). Aim for 2–4 sentences, for example: state whether you like buying shoes, how often you buy them now, and a brief reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I only buy them about once a year now. Recently I buy fewer shoes because they are expensive, so I save up and choose carefully.

Sugerencia: Clarify the main point and correct contradictions (you said online but then mentioned offline). Use a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason with linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'a shoes' → 'shoes', 'It save' → 'It saves'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is more convenient. For example, shopping online saves time and lets me compare styles and prices quickly.

Sugerencia: Give a direct numeric answer then explain briefly and precisely. Correct pronunciation and word choice (e.g., 'juices' → 'shoes') and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect idea and reason. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually spend up to about 20% of my monthly income on shoes. I prefer practical shoes for daily use rather than expensive ones bought to show off.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a specific reason or brief example. Reduce repetition and hesitations, and use correct forms ('a pair of comfortable shoes'). One or two sentences are enough: state your preference then give a clear reason or personal example.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for long periods and comfort matters more than style. For example, I choose sneakers that support my feet for walking and commuting.

× every boy like to buy shoes.

✓ every boy likes to buy shoes.

Subject 'every boy' is singular, so the verb must take singular form 'likes' (third person singular). Use subject-verb agreement: 'every' + singular noun requires singular verb. Suggestion: for similar phrases use 'every + singular noun' with 's' on the verb (he/she/it form).

× Umm, I in the recent times I I scarcely buy my own shoes because it takes it cost me a lot of money to do so.

✓ In recent times I have scarcely bought my own shoes because it costs me a lot of money to do so.

The original has redundant pronouns and incorrect tense/word order. 'In recent times' paired with a present perfect ('have bought') expresses recent experience. 'It takes it cost me' is ungrammatical; use 'it costs me' to state expense. Remove duplicate 'I'. Suggestion: use 'In recent times I have scarcely bought...' or 'Recently I have seldom bought...'.

× And uh, I'd like to say I will buy shoes once a year.

✓ And I'd like to say I buy shoes once a year.

Mixing 'I'd like to say' (present conditional) with 'I will buy' is acceptable but unnatural here; simple present 'I buy' expresses habitual action better. If you mean a plan, 'I plan to buy shoes once a year' is clearer. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, or 'I plan to' / 'I intend to' for future plans.

× most of my shoes are bought online because I think it's much more convenient to uh, to buy a shoes in the offline shop.

✓ Most of my shoes are bought online because I think it's much more convenient than buying shoes in offline shops.

'to buy a shoes' is incorrect: 'a' with plural 'shoes' is wrong and 'in the offline shop' is awkward. Use comparative structure 'more convenient than' and gerund 'buying' after convenience. Also remove article before plural 'shoes' and use plural 'shops' or 'a shop'. Suggestion: use 'more convenient than buying shoes in physical shops' or 'than buying shoes in a brick-and-mortar shop.'

× It save a lot of time to communicate with the shoppers and uh, it's more.

✓ It saves a lot of time communicating with shop assistants, and it's more convenient.

Verb needs third person singular 'saves'. 'To communicate with the shoppers' is wordy; 'communicating with shop assistants' is natural. Sentence ending 'it's more' is incomplete; specify 'more convenient' or similar. Suggestion: complete the comparison and use 'saves' for third person singular subjects.

× I normally I will spend 20% of my income at most on my shoes because I think the role of a pair of juices is to, is to use, not to, uh, flexing, not to show up, show off.

✓ I normally spend at most 20% of my income on shoes because I think the purpose of a pair of shoes is to be used, not to be shown off.

Redundant 'I' removed. For habitual actions use simple present 'spend' rather than 'will spend'. 'Role of a pair of juices' contains typos: 'juices' -> 'shoes' and 'role' -> 'purpose' is better. Use infinitive or passive 'to be used' and 'to be shown off' rather than 'flexing' or 'show up'. Suggestion: use clear nouns ('purpose') and parallel infinitive/passive structures: 'to be used, not to be shown off.'

× I have uh, most of my shoes are bought online because I think it's much more convenient to uh, to buy a shoes in the offline shop.

✓ Most of my shoes are bought online because I think it's much more convenient to buy shoes in offline shops.

Duplicate of earlier: 'a shoes' is plural so remove 'a'. Use plural 'shops' or 'a shop' with singular. Ensure article matches noun number. Suggestion: 'buy shoes in an offline shop' or 'buy shoes in offline shops.'

× Well, I prefer the comfortable shoes because I think the role of a pair of shoes is to, is to use rather than showing off.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable shoes because I think the purpose of a pair of shoes is to be used rather than to show off.

Do not use 'the' before a general plural when speaking generally; say 'comfortable shoes' not 'the comfortable shoes'. 'Role' -> 'purpose' and change 'is to use' to passive 'is to be used'. Parallel structure: 'to be used rather than to show off' or 'rather than to be shown off.' Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'the' and keep parallel verb forms.

× And I prefer to take a pair of, uh, comfortable one, uh, because that's the real usage of shoes.

✓ And I prefer to take a comfortable pair because that's the real use of shoes.

'A pair of comfortable one' mixes singular/plural and demonstrative. Use 'a comfortable pair' (pair is singular). 'Real usage' is awkward; 'real use' is clearer. Remove filler words. Suggestion: say 'I prefer a comfortable pair' or 'I prefer comfortable shoes'.