Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question. Avoid filler words (uh, so) and redundant phrases. Provide one or two specific supporting details (what types and why) using linking words for coherence. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and I usually buy a new pair about once a month. For example, I buy running shoes for exercise and casual sneakers for everyday wear, because I like having different styles for different activities.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and one or two clear reasons with linking words. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "the online system it is" → "online shopping is"). Be specific about advantages or an example to support your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because online shopping is more convenient and available 24/7. For instance, I can compare prices and read reviews, so I often find better deals than in physical stores.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear amount statement and then give a concise reason. Fix grammar (e.g., "per shoes" → "per pair"). Avoid vague phrases like "they say"—be specific about why you spend that amount. Limit to one or two supporting details.

Ejemplo: I usually spend around $100 per pair because I prefer good-quality shoes that last longer. For example, I invest in durable running shoes since they withstand frequent exercise.

Sugerencia: Answer directly which you prefer (one choice), then explain briefly with clear reasons and linking words. Avoid saying both unless you clarify a priority (e.g., I prefer comfort but also care about style). Fix grammar and word choice ("prepared" → "prefer", "important to comfortable" → "important to be comfortable").

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often exercise outdoors and need proper support. However, I also choose styles that look good, so I usually buy comfortable shoes that have a fashionable design.

× Yeah, I like my shoes.

✓ Yes, I like shoes.

The original is acceptable but the phrase 'my shoes' implies ownership rather than a general preference; changing to 'I like shoes' fits the question about buying shoes generally and matches present simple usage for habits.

× So I usually buy the shoes, uh, once a month.

✓ I usually buy shoes about once a month.

Remove the definite article 'the' because we speak about shoes in general, not specific shoes. Use 'about once a month' for natural frequency expression. Present simple 'usually buy' correctly describes a habit.

× So actually the shoes are various types.

✓ Actually, shoes come in various types.

The structure 'the shoes are various types' is ungrammatical. Use 'shoes come in various types' to express that shoes exist in different types. 'Come in' is the correct collocation.

× So I get, I like getting the type of shoes.

✓ I like getting different types of shoes.

Use 'getting' correctly with a clear object: 'different types of shoes'. Also pluralize 'type' to 'types' and reorder for natural English.

× Yes, I usually buy the shoes online because the online system it is more convenient and I could buy anywhere anytime.

✓ Yes, I usually buy shoes online because the online system is more convenient and I can buy anywhere, anytime.

Remove 'the' before 'shoes' for general reference. Delete redundant pronoun 'it' after 'system'. Use present simple 'is' for condition and 'can' for ability (present), not 'could' which is conditional/past. Add comma between 'anywhere' and 'anytime' for clarity.

× So yes, there's a reason why I usually buy shoes online.

✓ Yes, there is a reason why I usually buy shoes online.

Contraction 'there's' is acceptable in speech but spelled out here for clarity; grammar is correct. This suggestion keeps meaning while using full form.

× MMM almost $100 per shoes because they say the shoes is expensive so and I want to buy the various type shoes so yes I invest the shoes.

✓ I spend almost $100 per pair of shoes because shoes are expensive, and I like to buy various types of shoes, so I invest in shoes.

Multiple errors: 'per shoes' should be 'per pair of shoes' (singular/plural and unit), 'they say the shoes is expensive' should be 'shoes are expensive' (plural subject with plural verb), 'the various type shoes' should be 'various types of shoes' (plural and correct noun phrase), and 'I invest the shoes' should be 'I invest in shoes' (correct preposition). Also use present simple 'spend' to match habitual action.

× I absolutely prepared comfortable shoes and fashionable shoes because I like to go to exercise outdoors, so it is important to comfortable shoes.

✓ I absolutely prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I like to exercise outdoors, so comfortable shoes are important.

'Prepared' is wrong verb; use 'prefer'. Contrast uses 'prefer A to B' and 'fashionable shoes' should become 'fashionable ones' to avoid repetition. 'Go to exercise' is incorrect; use 'exercise' or 'go exercising'. 'It is important to comfortable shoes' is incorrect word order and missing verb; use 'comfortable shoes are important'.

× It makes me more active and convenient.

✓ They make me more active and comfortable.

'It' refers vaguely; 'they' (shoes) is plural. 'Convenient' describes situations or things, not a person; use 'comfortable' to describe how shoes affect you. Ensure plural verb agreement with 'they make'.