Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like buying shoes, then give one or two specific reasons and a brief frequency statement. Avoid repetition and filler words, and use correct verb forms and countable/uncountable forms (e.g., 'often' not 'oftenly', 'I like buying shoes' or 'I don't buy shoes often').

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't buy them often because of my limited budget. I consider shoes important because they affect both comfort and appearance, so when I do shop I choose carefully.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and explain briefly with one or two clear reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Use conditional correctly (e.g., 'if I order the wrong size, it won't fit') and make the tense consistent.

Ejemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I worry about sizing: if I order the wrong size it won't fit, and returning items can be time-consuming and costly.

Sugerencia: Provide a specific range or typical amount and explain briefly why with clear vocabulary. Keep sentences short and avoid redundancy (e.g., don't repeat the same idea with different words).

Ejemplo: I don't spend a lot on shoes; usually I spend around $30–$50 for a pair. However, I invest more in shoes I wear frequently because comfortable, durable shoes are worth the extra cost.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference statement, then support it with a concise reason and an example. Use clear linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example') and correct grammar ('it doesn't suit me' not 'it will doesn't suit on me').

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because if a shoe is uncomfortable I will feel uneasy all day. For example, I usually choose cushioned sneakers for walking rather than trendy but stiff shoes.

× Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy oftenly because of budget shortage.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often because of a shortage of budget.

The adverb 'often' is correct; 'oftenly' is not a standard word. Also add the object 'them' for clarity and use the article phrase 'a shortage of budget' or better 'a limited budget'. Suggestion: replace 'oftenly' with 'often', include the object 'them', and change 'budget shortage' to 'a shortage of budget' or 'a limited budget'.

× But I'd like to buying shoes because shoes.

✓ But I'd like to buy shoes because they are useful.

After 'I'd like', use the base infinitive 'to buy', not the gerund 'buying'. The original sentence is also incomplete and repetitive; add a reason and pronoun to make it grammatical and clear.

× I think shoe is the most important part of our dressing part.

✓ I think shoes are the most important part of our outfit.

Countable nouns need plural form when speaking generally ('shoes' not 'shoe'); 'part of our dressing part' is unidiomatic and redundant. Use 'outfit' or 'dress' and plural 'shoes are'. This fixes number and word choice errors.

× So it it carries our overlooks and it is so much important to to wear a good shoe and.

✓ So they affect our appearance, and it is very important to wear good shoes.

The sentence has repetition ('it it', 'to to'), wrong word choice ('overlooks' should be 'appearance'), singular/plural mismatch, and is incomplete. Rephrase to a clear structure: subject 'they' (shoes) + verb 'affect' + object 'appearance', and use 'good shoes' plural.

× No, I never bought shoes online because I think it causes many difficulties because if I, if I ordered, if I order the wrong shoe, it will never fit, fit on me and it will be, it will be very difficult and it will be uh, it will be problematic for me. So in that case I didn't.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I think it can cause many problems: if I order the wrong shoes, they may not fit me, and returning them would be difficult for me. So I haven't done that.

Mixes past simple and present perfect incorrectly. Use present perfect 'have never bought' for experience up to now. 'Causes' should be 'can cause' or 'may cause' to express possibility. Use plural 'shoes' and pronoun 'they'. 'So in that case I didn't' is incomplete; use 'I haven't done that'. Also avoid repetition and filler words.

× I don't usually spend much money on my shoes, but I always try to give a good amount of investment in my shoes because shoes are also a part of our feet and it also carries our looks and I think we all should spend a good amount of money in our shoes.

✓ I don't usually spend much on shoes, but I try to invest a reasonable amount in them because shoes protect our feet and affect our appearance; I think we should spend a reasonable amount on shoes.

Unnecessary article 'my' before 'shoes' when speaking generally; 'give a good amount of investment in' is unnatural — use 'invest a reasonable amount in'. 'Part of our feet' is incorrect: shoes protect our feet. 'Carry our looks' is unidiomatic; use 'affect our appearance'. Preposition 'in' should be 'on' for money: 'spend on shoes'. Also avoid repetition.

× Both are important in in different cases, but if I have to prefer, I would go for comfortable shoes over prefer over uh fashionable shoes.

✓ Both are important in different situations, but if I had to choose, I would choose comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones.

'Have to prefer' is unidiomatic; use 'have to choose' or 'if I had to choose'. Avoid repeating 'prefer'. Use 'rather than' or 'instead of' for comparison and plural 'ones' for 'shoes'. Remove filler words.

× Because if I have if I have no comfort, it will doesn't suit on me and I will feel uneasy.

✓ Because if I have no comfort, it will not suit me and I will feel uneasy.

'It will doesn't' mixes future 'will' with negated present 'doesn't'; use 'will not' + base verb 'suit'. Also 'suit on me' is incorrect — use 'suit me'. Remove duplicated phrase 'if I have' and maintain correct verb form after 'will'.

× So that's why I would go for comfortable shoes over fashionable shoes.

✓ So that's why I would choose comfortable shoes over fashionable ones.

Original is understandable but repetitive; use 'choose' for clarity and 'ones' as a pronoun for 'shoes' to avoid repetition.