Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. For example, use 'there are many books to search' instead of 'that place have a lot of books to searching in'. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences clear and concise.

Ejemplo: I sometimes go to the library when I have free time because there are many books to explore. Moreover, it is a quiet place where I can read and relax.

Sugerencia: Focus on correct verb forms and sentence structure. Use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid repeating similar ideas unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I usually go to the library to read books. Sometimes, I study there and use my iPad to attend live classes. In addition, I find books to gather more information.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and improve sentence clarity. Replace 'I don't have the Internet to searching for' with 'I didn't have the Internet to search'. Also, explain more specifically what you learned or saw.

Ejemplo: Of course, when I was young, I didn't have the Internet to search for information. So, the library was the best place for me to see pictures and learn new things.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words like 'because' properly and avoid awkward phrasing such as 'a lot of people very strict for their kids'. Try to express ideas more naturally.

Ejemplo: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because many parents are strict about their children's education. They encourage studying hard since education is very important for their future.

× I sometimes go to the library when I have time because that place have a lot of books to searching in and moreover they still have the quiet place for me to reading a book and make me feel came down over there.

✓ I sometimes go to the library when I have time because that place has a lot of books to search in and moreover they still have a quiet place for me to read a book and make me feel calm over there.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'that place' (Singular and plural issue). 'To searching' should be 'to search' because after 'to' we use the base form of the verb. 'The quiet place' should be 'a quiet place' because it is not a specific known place. 'To reading' should be 'to read' for the same reason as before. 'Make me feel came down' is incorrect; it should be 'make me feel calm' to express the intended meaning.

× I usually go there to reading a book, sometime I study and I take my iPad to learning from a live class.

✓ I usually go there to read a book, sometimes I study and I take my iPad to learn from a live class.

After 'to' we use the base form of the verb, so 'to reading' should be 'to read' and 'to learning' should be 'to learn'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb meaning 'occasionally'.

× And moreover I still find some books from the library to read for searching more information.

✓ And moreover I still find some books from the library to read to search for more information.

The phrase 'to read for searching' is incorrect; it should be 'to read to search for' because 'search' is the base verb after 'to' and 'search for' is the correct phrasal verb. This corrects the verb form and preposition usage.

× Of course, because when I was young I don't have the Internet to searching for, so the library is the best place for me to see the picture or to learn something new over there.

✓ Of course, because when I was young I didn't have the Internet to search for, so the library was the best place for me to see pictures or to learn something new there.

The sentence refers to the past, so 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' (Past tense issue). 'To searching for' should be 'to search for' (verb + base form after 'to'). 'Is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. 'The picture' should be 'pictures' to match plural meaning.

× I think they must go because in China a lot of people very strict for their kids to learning and studying more because in the future their education is very serious.

✓ I think they must go because in China a lot of people are very strict with their kids to learn and study more because in the future their education is very serious.

'People very strict' is missing the verb 'are' (Subject-verb agreement). 'Strict for' should be 'strict with' (preposition correction). 'To learning and studying' should be 'to learn and study' (verb base form after 'to').