Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some irrelevant or confusing parts, such as 'Things change' and 'It is a tourist'. Try to give a clear, direct response with relevant supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes go to the library because the quiet environment helps me concentrate better. Also, the library near my house is a beautiful building, which makes visiting more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it could be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas and by correcting some grammar mistakes. Also, avoid repeating words like 'more more'.

Ejemplo: I usually practice coding and English in the library because I recently quit my job and need to prepare for a new one. Since coding is challenging, I solve many problems from the question bank, and because my target is an international company, improving my English is essential.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific supporting details. Avoid incomplete or unclear sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. I remember reading about the mathematician Gauss, who was a prodigy. For example, when he was 19, he discovered properties of a 17-sided polygon, which fascinated me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'very often phenomenon'.

Ejemplo: Definitely, Chinese kids often go to the library because students in Taiwan face heavy academic pressure. After regular classes, they usually do homework and prepare for exams the next day, so visiting the library is quite common.

× It is a tourist.

✓ It is a tourist attraction.

The sentence 'It is a tourist.' is incomplete and incorrect because 'tourist' is a noun referring to a person. The intended meaning is likely that the library is a place visited by tourists, so the correct phrase is 'a tourist attraction.' This fixes the 'There be issue' by properly describing the existence of the attraction.

× I often go to the library when I was a kid

✓ I often went to the library when I was a kid

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past time 'when I was a kid.' The verb should be in the past tense 'went' to agree with the past time reference. This corrects the past tense issue by matching verb tense to the time frame.

× the story I most impressive is that the mathematician Gaussian, he he's he was a prodigy.

✓ The story I find most impressive is that the mathematician Gaussian was a prodigy.

The original sentence has awkward structure and redundant pronouns ('he he's he'). The correction simplifies the sentence, uses 'find most impressive' to express opinion, and removes unnecessary pronouns, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And then he when he was 19 years old, he drove a 17 side Polygon by using.

✓ And then, when he was 19 years old, he drew a 17-sided polygon.

The verb 'drove' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'drew' (past tense of 'draw'). Also, '17 side Polygon' should be '17-sided polygon' to correctly describe the shape. This fixes the past tense issue and adjective form.

× the students in Taiwan has the heavy pressure on academic competition

✓ the students in Taiwan have heavy pressure from academic competition

The subject 'students' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has' to agree in number. Also, 'pressure on academic competition' is better expressed as 'pressure from academic competition.' This corrects the singular/plural agreement and preposition use.

× So it is a very often phenomenon.

✓ So it is a very common phenomenon.

The phrase 'very often phenomenon' is incorrect; 'often' is an adverb and cannot modify 'phenomenon' directly. The correct adjective is 'common' to describe a frequent occurrence. This fixes the incorrect use of adjectives and improves naturalness.