Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite detailed and natural, but it could be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and keep within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me concentrate better than studying at home. Moreover, the library near my home is an eco-friendly building with a beautiful spiral staircase, which makes it a pleasant place to study.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant with good supporting details. To improve, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating 'practice' twice. Also, try to combine related ideas to make your answer more concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I usually go to the library to code and study English because I'm preparing for job interviews. Since I want to work for a foreign company, I practise algorithm problems and improve my English skills almost every day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is interesting but slightly unclear and a bit long. Start with a direct answer, then add one specific example with clear explanation. Avoid vague phrases like 'mathematician gods' and ensure your details are accurate and easy to understand.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went to the library as a child and read many books. One book that impressed me was about a young mathematician who discovered how to construct a 17-sided polygon using only a ruler and compass.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and informative but could be improved by correcting grammar ('child' should be 'children') and using linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, children in Taiwan often go to the library because of the intense academic competition. After classes, they usually study there to finish homework and prepare for exams the next day.

× In Taiwan, child often go to the library due to the heavy pressure of academic competition.

✓ In Taiwan, children often go to the library due to the heavy pressure of academic competition.

The word 'child' is singular, but the sentence refers to children in general, so the plural form 'children' should be used. Also, 'children' requires the plural verb 'go' which is correctly used here. Using the correct plural form ensures subject-verb agreement and clarity.