Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition like "which makes and which makes" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I visit the library daily because it provides a quiet environment where students focus on their studies. This atmosphere of dedication helps me concentrate better and improve my learning.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and does not address the question. Always provide a direct response with supporting details. Even if you do not do much, explain what you do or why. Keep your answer natural and relevant.

Ejemplo: Usually, I spend time reading textbooks and taking notes in the library. Sometimes, I also use the computers there to research for my assignments.

Sugerencia: Your answer is mostly clear but contains grammatical errors such as 'didn't went' instead of 'didn't go'. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'but' to improve coherence. Try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary words.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't go to a library when I was a child because my hometown lacked such facilities. However, now that I live in Chandigarh, which has many libraries, I visit them daily to focus on my studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has repetition ('that is that that is') and unclear ending ('focus on this'). Use precise vocabulary and complete your thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' correctly to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, Chinese kids often visit libraries because China is a modern country with many resources available to its citizens. Moreover, libraries provide a quiet place where children can concentrate on their studies.

× I visit library on daily basis because of my studies.

✓ I visit the library on a daily basis because of my studies.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required. Also, the phrase 'on daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis' to be grammatically correct.

× Library is a place where there is so much of silence and all the students they continue to study which makes and which makes an environment that is full of dedication and enhances your views.

✓ The library is a place where there is so much silence and all the students continue to study, which creates an environment full of dedication and enhances your views.

The sentence incorrectly repeats the subject with 'all the students they'. The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, 'so much of silence' should be 'so much silence'. The phrase 'which makes and which makes' is repetitive and should be simplified to 'which creates'. Additionally, 'Library' should have the definite article 'The'.

× No, I didn't went to a library when I was a small child as I used to live in my hometown and it doesn't give facilities like that of a library.

✓ No, I didn't go to a library when I was a small child as I used to live in my hometown and it didn't have facilities like a library.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'went' should be 'go'. Also, 'doesn't give facilities' is incorrect in past context; it should be 'didn't have facilities'. The phrase 'like that of a library' is awkward and can be simplified to 'like a library'.

× Whereas now living in a city like Chandigarh where there are so many libraries, I go on a daily basis in order to focus on my studies.

✓ Whereas now, living in a city like Chandigarh where there are so many libraries, I go daily in order to focus on my studies.

The phrase 'go on a daily basis' is correct but can be simplified to 'go daily'. Also, a comma after 'Whereas now' improves clarity. The preposition usage is acceptable but the sentence can be made smoother by these changes.

× Chinese kids often visit a library as China is a country that is that that is more modernized and have many amenities and resources that are really helpful for their citizens.

✓ Chinese kids often visit libraries as China is a country that is more modernized and has many amenities and resources that are really helpful for its citizens.

'Visit a library' should be pluralized to 'visit libraries' to match the plural subject 'kids'. The phrase 'that is that that is' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'that is'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'country'. 'Their citizens' should be 'its citizens' because 'country' is singular.