Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, say 'I often go to the library near my house because it is a quiet and peaceful place to read. Also, I borrow books from there because it is cheaper than buying them.'

Ejemplo: I often go to the library near my house because it is a quiet and peaceful place to read. Also, I borrow books from there because it is cheaper than buying them.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, 'I usually go to the library to study because it is quiet. Also, I can find many different types of study books there, which helps me learn better.'

Ejemplo: I usually go to the library to study because it is quiet. Also, I can find many different types of study books there, which helps me learn better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear and complete answer with proper sentence structure. For example, 'When I was a kid, I lived in a small town where there was no public library. Also, my government school did not have a library, so I did not go to the library as a child.'

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I lived in a small town where there was no public library. Also, my government school did not have a library, so I did not go to the library as a child.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information. Try to answer directly and use linking words. For example, 'I am not sure about the study habits of Chinese children. However, I think many of them go to the library to study and read books.'

Ejemplo: I am not sure about the study habits of Chinese children. However, I think many of them go to the library to study and read books.

× Yes, the library is a quiet place for reading and they have a library near to my house so I also like to read books.

✓ Yes, the library is a quiet place for reading and there is a library near my house, so I also like to read books.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they have' referring to 'the library', which is singular. It should be 'there is' to indicate existence of a library near the house. Also, 'near to my house' should be 'near my house' as 'near' does not require 'to'.

× Libraries a peaceful place for reading here.

✓ Libraries are peaceful places for reading here.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' to link the subject 'Libraries' with the predicate. Also, 'place' should be plural 'places' to agree with plural subject 'Libraries'.

× Also I try to grow books from here because it's more cheaper than.

✓ Also, I try to borrow books from here because it's cheaper.

The phrase 'grow books' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'borrow' when taking books from a library. 'More cheaper' is redundant; 'cheaper' alone suffices. The sentence is incomplete after 'than', so it is omitted for clarity.

× Basically I go to library for study and I there because there I and get different types of study books here and similar types of books available.

✓ Basically, I go to the library to study, and I go there because I can get different types of study books here, and similar types of books are available.

The sentence misses the article 'the' before 'library'. 'For study' should be 'to study' to express purpose. The phrase 'I there because there I and get' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'I go there because I can get'. Also, 'similar types of books available' needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct.

× Many of them is a quiet place for reading here so I can try to read with my.

✓ Many of them are quiet places for reading here, so I can try to read quietly.

'Many of them' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'A quiet place' should be plural 'quiet places' to agree with 'many'. The phrase 'read with my' is incomplete and unclear; replaced with 'read quietly' for clarity.

× When I was a kid I lives in near a small town but they have no Public Library or also my school is a government school was a government school so there have no Public Library or study library here.

✓ When I was a kid, I lived near a small town, but there was no public library. Also, my school was a government school, so there was no public or study library there.

'Lives' should be past tense 'lived' to match 'was a kid'. 'They have' is incorrect; 'there was' is correct for existence in past. Repetition and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× So when I was kid I did I didn't go library but I.

✓ So when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library.

Missing article 'a' before 'kid'. 'Did I didn't' is incorrect; only 'didn't' is needed. 'Go library' requires preposition 'to' as 'go to the library'. The sentence is incomplete; corrected to a complete sentence.

× Basically, I am not clear about the sinus study level.

✓ Basically, I am not clear about the Chinese study level.

'Sinus' is likely a typo for 'Chinese'. The phrase 'not clear about' is acceptable but could be improved for clarity. Corrected typo.

× So I cannot say that Chinese student kids often go to library.

✓ So I cannot say that Chinese students often go to the library.

'Student kids' is redundant; 'students' suffices. 'Go to library' requires the article 'the' before 'library'.

× I have to. I think I have to research about their study, then I can clearly say they go to library or not.

✓ I think I have to research their study habits before I can clearly say whether they go to the library or not.

Fragment 'I have to.' is incomplete. 'Research about' is incorrect; 'research' is transitive and does not need 'about'. Added 'whether' for clarity in the conditional clause. Added 'the' before 'library'.