Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag ma grammar ra sentence structure ma galti haru chan. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra thulo sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau. Linking words jastai 'because', 'so' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha. English ma natural awaz ko lagi, tapai le sentence haru lai ramro tarikale jodne prayas garnu parcha.

Ejemplo: No, I do not often go to the library because it is far from my home. Also, not many people in my area visit the library. If I need to read books, I usually buy them instead.

Sugerencia: Tapai le prashna ko uttar ma thulo sentence haru prayog garnu bhayeko cha, tara grammar ra clarity ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra supporting details ma linking words jastai 'if', 'then' ko prayog garna saknuhunchha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau, ra context anusar relevant shabda haru prayog garnu parcha.

Ejemplo: I usually do not go to the library. However, if I go, I read books quietly in a peaceful area without disturbing others.

Sugerencia: Tapai le prashna ko uttar ma ramro prayas garnu bhayeko cha tara grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'but', 'and' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau ra unnecessary repetition hataunu parcha.

Ejemplo: No, I did not go to the library outside, but my school had a library. I used to go there to do my homework during leisure periods.

Sugerencia: Tapai le prashna ko uttar ma spashta ra sidha uttar dinu parcha. Grammar ra vocabulary ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le 'I don't know' bhanna saknuhunchha tara sentence lai ramro tarikale banau, ra unnecessary shabda haru hataunu parcha.

Ejemplo: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I am not from China and I do not have much information about their habits.

× No, I do not go off go to library because it my home is far from the library and my place where I live the library isn't that much popular like popular in here only few people people go to library.

✓ No, I do not go to the library because my home is far from the library and in my area, the library isn't very popular like it is here; only a few people go to the library.

The phrase 'go off go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. Also, 'my place where I live' is better expressed as 'in my area'. The phrase 'isn't that much popular like popular in here' is incorrect; it should be 'isn't very popular like it is here'. Prepositions like 'to' and 'in' are used incorrectly and need correction.

× No, I do not go off go to library because it my home is far from the library and my place where I live the library isn't that much popular like popular in here only few people people go to library.

✓ No, I do not go to the library because my home is far from the library and in my area, the library isn't very popular like it is here; only a few people go to the library.

The phrase 'only few people people go to library' has a repetition and missing article. It should be 'only a few people go to the library'. Also, 'library' should be preceded by 'the' as it refers to a specific place.

× But me I have never gone to.

✓ But I have never gone there.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'But me I have never gone to' lacks an object after 'to'. It should be 'But I have never gone there' to complete the thought properly.

× If I have to go to library and read books, I'll just buy you or I just.

✓ If I have to go to the library and read books, I'll just buy them or I will just...

The sentence is incomplete and uses 'you' incorrectly. It should be 'buy them' referring to books. Also, 'I'll just' needs completion. Modal verb 'will' is used correctly but the sentence needs completion for clarity.

× I have already told I do not go to library but if I go and then I will just read any book or I will just take any book and read the year with like in a peaceful area and without disturbing other.

✓ I have already told you I do not go to the library, but if I go, I will just read any book or take a book and read it in a peaceful area without disturbing others.

Missing prepositions like 'to' before 'the library' and incorrect phrase 'read the year with like' which should be 'read it in'. Also, 'disturbing other' should be 'disturbing others'.

× No, I did not go to library when I was a kid but at school there was library and I used to go there for to do my homework which my teacher gave to me and if there is any leisure period I always go to there and do to homework.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid, but at school there was a library and I used to go there to do my homework which my teacher gave me, and if there was any leisure period, I always went there to do homework.

'Go to library' needs 'the'. 'There was library' needs 'a library'. 'For to do' is incorrect; it should be 'to do'. 'Gave to me' is better as 'gave me'. 'If there is any leisure period' should be past tense 'if there was any leisure period' to match past context. 'I always go to there' should be 'I always went there'.

× I don't know about science grid because I am not a Chinese. I'm nephews so I don't know anything about them.

✓ I don't know about Chinese kids because I am not Chinese. They are my nephews, so I don't know anything about them.

'Science grid' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'Chinese kids'. 'I'm nephews' is incorrect; it should be 'They are my nephews'. Pronouns need to correctly refer to the subjects.