List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and correct articles and word forms. Use one or two supporting reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') and give a specific example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. For example, last week I wrote down exactly what I needed for dinner and avoided impulse purchases at the supermarket.

Sugerencia: Clarify the situation and correct pronoun and tense errors. Start with a direct answer about whether you make lists for work, then explain effectiveness and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'but' to show contrast.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a to-do list for work, but it does not always work out. For example, I plan tasks at home, however unexpected meetings often force me to change the order of my tasks when I arrive at the office.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer more clearly and correct vocabulary and pronunciation errors ('do not' and 'receipt' or 'list', not 'leash'). Provide a reason and a clear example. Use linking words like 'for example' correctly and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people do not like making lists because plans sometimes fail. For example, someone might take a shopping list but then see a special offer and decide to buy something different, so the list becomes useless.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, concise preference statement and support it with one or two specific reasons. Correct repetition and grammar, and avoid irrelevant details. Use linking words like 'because' and provide a short example of how you use your phone for lists.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me and can easily edit items. For example, I use a notes app to add items as I remember them and tick them off while shopping.

× Yeah, I do make a list when I go for a shopping because it saves time and also it's safe time and also we I it helps me to not to take on necessary things.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it saves time and helps me avoid taking unnecessary things.

Pronoun and word order errors: 'we I it helps me' is incorrect and must be simplified to a clear subject and verb. 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; use 'go shopping'. 'safe time' is wrong choice; use 'saves time'. 'not to take on necessary things' should be 'avoid taking unnecessary things'. Suggestion: keep subject and verb consistent and use common collocations (go shopping, save time, avoid taking unnecessary things).

× Yes, I prefer uh, when I'm at your home, I make a list for work like I will do this that, I will eat this, that, but when I reach to work, it does not go as per my plan.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list for work at home, writing things like 'I will do this' or 'I will eat that', but when I get to work, things often do not go according to my plan.

Tense and wording: 'prefer uh, when I'm at your home, I make a list' is awkward; use 'prefer to make a list for work at home'. 'reach to work' is incorrect preposition; use 'get to work'. 'does not go as per my plan' is unnatural; use 'do not go according to my plan' or 'things often do not go according to plan'. Suggestion: use consistent present simple for habitual actions and common prepositions (get to work, according to).

× In my opinion, some people dononet like making lists because it does not work out. However, now however, when they think uh, for example when they are going for a shopping by taking a leash, but at that point they like something else.

✓ In my opinion, some people do not like making lists because the lists do not work out for them. For example, when they go shopping with a list, they may see something else they prefer at the store.

Negation and word choice: 'dononet' is a misspelling of 'do not'. 'going for a shopping' should be 'go shopping'. 'taking a leash' is incorrect word choice; probably intended 'a list'. Sentence fragments and connectors: avoid repeating 'however' and the final clause is a fragment. Suggestion: split into two clear sentences, correct negation and use natural collocations (go shopping, with a list).

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, the something I would I would never leave is my mobile phone. So uh, I also keep all record of my bank statement put in document in my phone, so I prefer.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I would never leave my mobile phone. I also keep records of my bank statements and documents on my phone, so I prefer using it.

Prepositions and article usage: 'keep all record of my bank statement put in document in my phone' is ungrammatical. Use 'keep records of my bank statements and documents on my phone'. 'make a list on my phone' is correct, but simplify repeated phrases. Suggestion: use plural 'records' for multiple statements, and preposition 'on' for storing files on a device.