ListPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes I do. I really enjoy making a list about the important items that I need to buy.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

It depends on the specific situation. If it's a long term assignment, I prefer to divide it into several parts and make a list for the each work.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

I guess it's just a personal habit someone may feel restrictive to.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see the alarm clock to remind me.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Puntuación: 75.0

Sugerencia: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然,建议避免使用“enjoy making a list about”,可以更自然地表达购物时列清单的习惯,并补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget any essential items, which helps me shop more efficiently.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误(如“the each work”),表达不够流畅,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: It depends on the task. For long-term assignments, I usually break them down into smaller parts and make separate lists for each to stay organized.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 表达不够清晰,语法和用词有误,建议用更准确的表达说明原因,并补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it too restrictive and prefer to be more spontaneous in their activities.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 表达不够自然,“see the alarm clock”用词不当,建议用更准确的表达说明手机提醒功能的优势。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it can send me reminders, which helps me remember important tasks easily.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× If it's a long term assignment, I prefer to divide it into several parts and make a list for the each work.

If it's a long-term assignment, I prefer to divide it into several parts and make a list for each task.

这里“the each work”中“the”是不必要的冠词,且“work”作为不可数名词不适合此处,应该用可数名词“task”表示具体的任务。应去掉“the”,并将“work”改为“task”,使表达更准确。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see the alarm clock to remind me.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can set an alarm to remind me.

“see the alarm clock to remind me”表达不准确,通常应说“set an alarm”来表示设置提醒。这里“see”与“alarm clock”搭配不当,应改为“set an alarm”更符合英语习惯。

Vocabulario

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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