List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid using past tense 'didn't' when talking about a habitual action; use present tense 'don't'. Also, reduce filler words like 'uh' and try to link your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your reason with linking words.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy browsing freely. This way, I can pick up things spontaneously without any plans.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and filler words. Use correct verb forms like 'even if I make one, it doesn't work'. Also, try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas. Express your opinion more naturally and clearly.

Ejemplo: I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to be flexible. Even if I make a list, it often doesn't help me since I like to do tasks spontaneously.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid mixing 'we' and 'I' in the same answer. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clearer explanation.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they enjoy unpredictability and surprises. They prefer to do things whenever and wherever they want without restrictions.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same idea multiple times and use linking words to make your answer more concise and natural. Also, correct minor mistakes like 'least' should be 'list'.

Ejemplo: If I need to make a list, I prefer using my phone because I carry it everywhere. This way, I don't have to bring extra items like paper or notebooks, and I can easily check my tasks anytime.

× No, I didn't, because I enjoy, uh, shopping with no aims, no plans, so I can enjoy the period that I've walked into the shop and I can just pick up the things I want immediately.

✓ No, I didn't, because I enjoy, uh, shopping with no aims, no plans, so I can enjoy the period when I walk into the shop and I can just pick up the things I want immediately.

The phrase 'that I've walked into the shop' incorrectly uses the present perfect tense to describe a general action. It should be in the simple present tense 'when I walk into the shop' to indicate a habitual action or general truth.

× I don't make a list for my work, and even I make it, it doesn't work because I am a person that do not like to rely on planning.

✓ I don't make a list for my work, and even if I make it, it doesn't work because I am a person who does not like to rely on planning.

The phrase 'that do not like' is incorrect because 'that' refers to 'person' which is singular, so the verb should be 'does not like' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'even I make it' is missing 'if' to form the correct conditional phrase 'even if I make it'.

× Because we like unpredictable things, and we like the surprise that comes when we don't know. And we like to do things wherever I want and whenever I want.

✓ Because we like unpredictable things, and we like the surprise that comes when we don't know. And we like to do things wherever we want and whenever we want.

The pronouns 'I' in 'wherever I want and whenever I want' are inconsistent with the plural subject 'we' used earlier. They should be changed to 'we' to maintain pronoun agreement.

× If I need to make the least, I prefer to make it on my phone because I use my phone everyday and I do not need to bring another thing like a paper or a notebook.

✓ If I need to make the list, I prefer to make it on my phone because I use my phone every day and I do not need to bring another thing like a paper or a notebook.

The word 'least' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list' which fits the context. Also, 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'; the adverb 'every day' should be used to mean 'each day'.