Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Actually, no, I don't make uh, laser while I go shopping because I just buy some necessity or look around, wash up.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Umm to be honest, I'm not usually make at least one study or work, but I think it's really helpful. Umm, I find it can help me work more efficiently.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Oh I think some people don't like make lists because they find it boring and also for some people make a list it's really hard to follow and they may have made some random events to come up.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Personally I prefer make a laser on my phone because it's more convenient for me and also I can check my list at any time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当,例如“laser”应为“list”,且句子结构不完整,表达不清晰。建议加强基础语法和词汇的准确使用,避免口语中的犹豫词,回答时尽量简洁明了。
Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I only buy necessities or just look around casually.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误,如“I'm not usually make”应为“I don't usually make”,且表达不够流畅。建议练习正确的时态和句型,使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: To be honest, I don't usually make lists for study or work, but I think they are really helpful because they help me work more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,如“don't like make lists”应为“don't like making lists”,句子结构不够清晰。建议加强动名词的使用和句子结构的练习,表达更准确。
Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring, and sometimes it's hard to follow the list when unexpected things happen.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中“make a laser”应为“make a list”,词汇错误影响表达。建议注意单词拼写和发音,使用正确词汇表达观点。
Ejemplo: Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and I can check it anytime.
× Actually, no, I don't make uh, laser while I go shopping because I just buy some necessity or look around, wash up.
✓ Actually, no, I don't make a list while I go shopping because I just buy some necessities or look around, wash up.
这里的错误是动词后面缺少-ing形式,应该用make a list。并且laser应为list,necessity应为复数形式necessities。建议注意动词后面接动名词形式,以及名词的单复数形式。
× Actually, no, I don't make uh, laser while I go shopping because I just buy some necessity or look around, wash up.
✓ Actually, no, I don't make a list while I go shopping because I just buy some necessities or look around, wash up.
necessity是不可数名词,表示必需品时应使用复数形式necessities。建议注意名词的单复数形式。
× Umm to be honest, I'm not usually make at least one study or work, but I think it's really helpful.
✓ Umm to be honest, I don't usually make at least one study or work, but I think it's really helpful.
这里动词make前缺少助动词do,且动词形式错误。建议使用一般现在时的否定形式don't make。
× Oh I think some people don't like make lists because they find it boring and also for some people make a list it's really hard to follow and they may have made some random events to come up.
✓ Oh I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and also for some people making a list is really hard to follow and they may have some random events come up.
动词like后应接动名词making,且句子中make a list应改为making a list。建议注意动词后接动名词形式。
× Personally I prefer make a laser on my phone because it's more convenient for me and also I can check my list at any time.
✓ Personally I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me and also I can check my list at any time.
动词prefer后应接动名词making,且laser应为list。建议注意动词后接动名词形式和单词拼写。