List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は直接的で自然ですが、理由の説明がやや曖昧で具体性に欠けます。より詳細な理由や具体例を加えることで、説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: I don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to decide what to buy based on what's fresh or on sale at the store, which helps me save money and choose better products.

Sugerencia: 回答が少し不明瞭で文法的な誤りもあります。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を具体的に説明し、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: As a university student, I don't make a study list because I find it hard to stick to a strict plan. However, I manage my time by focusing on urgent tasks first, and this method works well for me.

Sugerencia: 理由は述べられていますが、文が少し繰り返しで冗長です。接続詞を使い、より簡潔で明確に表現することを心がけましょう。

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find strict plans restrictive, and they prefer the freedom to decide spontaneously.

Sugerencia: 理由は明確ですが、同じ表現が繰り返されているため、冗長に感じられます。接続詞を使い、簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I check it frequently for emails, so I can easily review my list anytime, unlike paper lists which I might forget.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because if I make a list on paper, I will not see it many times.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because if I make a list on paper, I will not see it many times.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing a general preference. Therefore, 'prefer make' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer making'. This is a common verb + -ing form usage rule.