List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你嘅答案表達得幾好，但可以用多啲連接詞令句子更流暢，例如用「so」或者「therefore」連接原因同結果。另外，避免用「buying mission」呢啲唔太自然嘅詞語，可以用「shopping」或者「shopping tasks」會更貼切。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me shop more efficiently. Therefore, I can finish my shopping quickly and have more time to enjoy other activities.

Sugerencia: 你嘅答案有表達清楚原因同感受，但句子結構有啲唔自然，例如「make a take on the list」唔係正確用法。建議用更自然嘅表達，例如「tick off items on the list」。同時，可以用連接詞如「which」去連接句子，使內容更連貫。

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me feel less anxious. When I tick off all the tasks on the list, I feel a great sense of satisfaction.

Sugerencia: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤，例如「because of they」應該係「because they」。句子較長且缺乏連接詞，建議用「and」或「so」分開句子，令表達更清晰自然。

Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they enjoy doing things anytime they want, and they don't like being restricted by a list. They prefer to control their own time.

Sugerencia: 你嘅答案有表達清楚喜好同原因，但有啲語法錯誤，例如「in any time」應該係「at any time」，「when I was working」應該係「while I am working」。建議用連接詞如「so」令句子更流暢。

Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper and stick it on my desktop because I can see it at any time while I am working. So, when I take a break, I can leave my desk without worrying about forgetting tasks.

× I will make a list when I shop because I think it is more efficient.

✓ I make a list when I shop because I think it is more efficient.

The question asks about a habitual action, so the present simple tense should be used instead of the future tense 'will make'. 習慣性動作應使用一般現在時，唔應該用未來時。

× I can accomplish the buying mission in a shorter time and have more time for me to do the entertainment.

✓ I can accomplish the buying mission in a shorter time and have more time to do entertainment.

The phrase 'have more time for me to do the entertainment' is incorrect. It should be 'have more time to do entertainment' without 'for me' and 'the'. 'for me to do the entertainment'用法錯誤，應該用'to do entertainment'。

× I will make a list for my work because it can help me to feel less anxious.

✓ I make a list for my work because it helps me feel less anxious.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so present simple tense is appropriate instead of future tense 'will make'. Also, 'can help me to feel' is better as 'helps me feel'. 描述習慣性動作時應用一般現在時，'can help me to feel'改為'helps me feel'更自然。

× After I complete all the mission and make a take on the list, I can feel more satisfaction.

✓ After I complete all the missions and take items on the list, I feel more satisfied.

'mission' should be plural 'missions' to match 'all'. 'make a take on the list' is incorrect; it should be 'take items on the list'. Also, 'can feel more satisfaction' is better as 'feel more satisfied'. 'all the mission'應為複數'all the missions'，'make a take on the list'用法錯誤，應改為'take items on the list'，'can feel more satisfaction'改為'feel more satisfied'。

× I think it's because of they enjoy doing the things in any time and they don't like to be restricted by the list and they can control the time by themselves.

✓ I think it's because they enjoy doing things at any time, and they don't like to be restricted by the list, and they can control their time themselves.

'because of they' is incorrect; it should be 'because they'. 'doing the things' should be 'doing things'. 'in any time' should be 'at any time'. Also, 'control the time by themselves' is better as 'control their time themselves'. 'because of they'錯誤，應為'because they'；'doing the things'應為'doing things'；'in any time'應為'at any time'；'control the time by themselves'應為'control their time themselves'。

× I prefer to make a list on the paper and stick it on my desktop because I can see my lists in any time when I was working.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper and stick it on my desktop because I can see my lists anytime when I am working.

'on the paper' should be 'on paper' without 'the'. 'in any time' should be 'anytime'. 'when I was working' should be 'when I am working' to match present tense. 'on the paper'應為'on paper'，'in any time'應為'anytime'，'when I was working'應為'when I am working'。

× In the rest time I can just leave my working desk to take a rest.

✓ During rest time, I can just leave my desk to take a break.

'In the rest time' is incorrect; 'During rest time' is better. 'working desk' is unnatural; 'desk' suffices. 'take a rest' is better expressed as 'take a break'. 'in the rest time'應為'during rest time'，'working desk'不自然，應用'desk'，'take a rest'改為'take a break'更自然。