List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and correct, and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I made a list before going to the supermarket, which prevented me from buying unnecessary items.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Also, try to avoid repeating the same phrase and add a bit more detail to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list at the start of my day because it helps me organize all the tasks I need to complete. I find this method very effective and essential for staying productive.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid filler words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they see it as extra work. Additionally, they have good memories and can easily remember their tasks for the day without writing them down.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some hesitations and repetitive phrases. Try to speak more fluently and use concise sentences. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it's the most convenient method. Since I carry my phone everywhere, I can easily access my lists anytime, unlike paper lists which can be lost or forgotten.

× Yes, I usually make list when I show I go for a shopping because it helps me to remind everything which I need.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Additionally, 'helps me to remind' should be 'helps me remember' for correct verb usage.

× Yes, I usually make list when I show I go for a shopping because it helps me to remind everything which I need.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need.

The phrase 'when I show I go for a shopping' is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be 'when I go shopping' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× For example, last week I made a list when I went to supermarket to purchase things, then it helped me a lot so that I can't uh, I cannot buy unnecessary things from.

✓ For example, last week I made a list when I went to the supermarket to purchase things, then it helped me a lot so that I couldn't buy unnecessary things.

The noun 'supermarket' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'can't' should be in past tense 'couldn't' to match the past context. The phrase 'buy unnecessary things from' is incomplete and should end after 'things'.

× Yes, I usually make list whenever I start my day because I think that it is a very convenient way to help me remind all the tasks which I have to do in a day.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list whenever I start my day because I think that it is a very convenient way to help me remember all the tasks I have to do in a day.

Again, 'list' is singular and countable, so it needs the article 'a'. Also, 'help me remind' should be 'help me remember' for correct verb usage.

× According to me, some people don't like making less because they think that it is a like extra work for them.

✓ According to me, some people don't like making lists because they think that it is like extra work for them.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'lists'. Also, 'a like extra work' should be 'like extra work' without the article 'a'.

× They have a very good memory so they can remember all their tasks and their things for the day easily, so they don't need to make lists.

✓ They have very good memories so they can remember all their tasks and things for the day easily, so they don't need to make lists.

'Memory' in this context is better used in plural form 'memories' to refer to people's ability collectively. Also, 'their things' is vague; 'things' alone suffices.

× Well, usually I prefer to make lists on my phone because I think that it is the most convenient way to remind me things because I have my phone every day in my hand and whenever I go out also, so it is easy for me to take, uh, to take with me, uh, as instead of list on paper.

✓ Well, usually I prefer to make lists on my phone because I think that it is the most convenient way to remind me of things because I have my phone in my hand every day and whenever I go out, so it is easy for me to take it with me instead of a list on paper.

The phrase 'remind me things' should be 'remind me of things' to use the correct preposition. 'In my hand' is the correct phrase, not 'every day in my hand'. Also, 'as instead of list on paper' is incorrect; it should be 'instead of a list on paper' with the article 'a' before 'list'.