List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to remember the items I need. I find making lists a bit annoying."

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to remember the items I need. I find making lists a bit annoying and time-consuming.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains filler words. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. For example, "Yes, when I have a busy workload, I make lists to stay organised because they help me manage tasks efficiently."

Ejemplo: Yes, when I have a busy workload, I make lists to stay organised because they help me manage tasks efficiently and reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary."

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary, especially if they prefer to remember things mentally.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear preference with reasons and use linking words. For example, "I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I find it easier to see and tick off items on paper."

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I find it easier to see and tick off items, which helps me stay organised.

× No, actually I don't make a list when I go shopping because I just remember what items I buy so I don't memo that they tell items.

✓ No, actually I don't make a list when I go shopping because I just remember what items I buy so I don't note down those items.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'items'. The correct demonstrative pronoun here is 'those' to refer to the items previously mentioned. Also, 'memo' is incorrectly used as a verb; 'note down' or 'write down' is more appropriate.

× It's annoying.

✓ It is annoying.

Contraction 'It's' is acceptable in spoken English, but for clarity and formality, 'It is' is preferred. No grammatical error here, so this is optional.

× Umm, sometimes I have very busy work.

✓ Umm, sometimes I have very busy work to do.

The phrase 'very busy work' is awkward; adding 'to do' clarifies the meaning. Alternatively, 'I am very busy with work' would be better. However, this is more about natural phrasing than strict grammar.

× I make a list for my work to improve my, uh, effect.

✓ I make a list for my work to improve my efficiency.

The word 'effect' is incorrectly used; the intended meaning is likely 'efficiency' or 'effectiveness'. This is a vocabulary choice rather than grammar, but important for clarity.

× It's very work because, uh, it makes me comfortable and organized.

✓ It works very well because, uh, it makes me feel comfortable and organized.

The phrase 'It's very work' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'It works very well'. Also, 'makes me comfortable' is better expressed as 'makes me feel comfortable'.

× One of the biggest reason that some people don't like making lists is it's very annoying for of many people because it have some much time so some people feel that this unneeded.

✓ One of the biggest reasons that some people don't like making lists is that it is very annoying for many people because it takes some time, so some people feel that it is unnecessary.

'Reason' should be plural 'reasons' after 'one of the'. 'It's' should be 'that it is' for clarity. 'Have' should be 'takes' to refer to time. 'Some much time' is incorrect; 'some time' or 'too much time' is correct. 'This unneeded' should be 'it is unnecessary'.

× I prefer making a list on paper than my phone because surely my phone is more comfortable.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper rather than on my phone because surely my phone is more comfortable.

The preposition 'on' is missing before 'my phone'. The correct comparative phrase is 'rather than on my phone'.

× But I don't watch some lists so I like papers filling.

✓ But I don't check some lists, so I like filling out papers.

'Watch' is incorrect when referring to lists; 'check' or 'look at' is appropriate. 'Papers filling' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'filling out papers' or 'writing on paper'.