List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. I prefer to browse and buy things that catch my eye or that I need at the moment.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to improve coherence and be more specific about how making lists helps you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my schoolwork because I am afraid of forgetting my homework. This method helps me stay organised and complete tasks on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and use linking words to explain reasons logically.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to act spontaneously rather than planning everything in advance.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use clearer sentences and linking words to explain your preference effectively.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because my phone can remind me about important tasks, which helps me stay organised.

× I don't make a list when shopping, for example if I go to shopping or clothes, I always looking for what I need and I think it's beautiful.

✓ I don't make a list when shopping; for example, if I go shopping for clothes, I am always looking for what I need and think it's beautiful.

The phrase 'I always looking' is incorrect because the verb 'look' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'. Additionally, 'for example' should be followed by a comma to separate clauses properly.

× Yes, my work is a study and going to school, so I always make a list for my work because I afraid that I cannot miss the homework so I take note.

✓ Yes, my work is studying and going to school, so I always make a list for my work because I am afraid that I might miss the homework, so I take notes.

The phrase 'I afraid' is missing the verb 'am' to form 'I am afraid'. Also, 'cannot miss the homework' is better expressed as 'might miss the homework' to indicate possibility. 'Take note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to writing down multiple items.

× Because they prefer to do something spontaneously to making this in making this need to think their plan and establish their plan.

✓ Because they prefer to do something spontaneously rather than making a plan, as making a plan requires thinking and establishing their plan.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and unclear structure. 'To making this in making this' is incorrect; it should be 'rather than making a plan'. Also, the sentence needs to clarify that making a plan requires thinking and establishing it.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone than on paper because when I have a organization important, I usually take note in my phone and my phone can remind me to do this work.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because when I have an important organisation, I usually take notes on my phone, and my phone can remind me to do the work.

The phrase 'a organization important' is incorrect; it should be 'an important organisation' with the correct article and adjective order. 'Take note in my phone' should be 'take notes on my phone' because 'on' is the correct preposition for devices. Also, 'than' should be preceded by 'rather' to form 'rather than' for comparison.