List— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Of course I did, because when we make a list before we go to the shop, it makes me remember what we need to buy. If we don't do it, that means we may forgot something. So that's why this is a good reason to make a list when we go to the shop.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
That is great.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe they have confidence for themselves, such as they can remember, or maybe they are lazy.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make at least on my telephone because it's easy way and we usually go out and taking with telephone with us.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ภาษาอังกฤษที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้เวลาผิดรูปแบบ เช่น 'did' ควรใช้ 'do' ในปัจจุบัน นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล และลดความซ้ำซ้อน เช่น ใช้ 'because' หรือ 'so' อย่างเหมาะสม
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. Otherwise, I might forget important items. Therefore, making a list is very useful for me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: คำตอบนี้สั้นเกินไปและไม่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง ควรตอบโดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ชัดเจน และให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับการทำรายการสำหรับงานและผลลัพธ์ที่ได้
Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work tasks. It helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'confidence in themselves' และเพิ่ม linking words เพื่อเชื่อมความคิดให้ชัดเจนขึ้น
Ejemplo: Some people might not like making lists because they are confident in their memory, or perhaps they feel it's too much effort.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ เช่น 'prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy' และใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always carry my phone when I go out.
Gramática
× Of course I did, because when we make a list before we go to the shop, it makes me remember what we need to buy.
✓ Of course I do, because when we make a list before we go to the shop, it helps me remember what we need to buy.
The student used 'did' which is past tense, but the question is about a habitual action, so present tense 'do' is appropriate. Also, 'makes me remember' is better expressed as 'helps me remember' for clarity and correctness.
× If we don't do it, that means we may forgot something.
✓ If we don't do it, that means we may forget something.
The modal verb 'may' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'forgot' (past tense) is incorrect; it should be 'forget'.
× So that's why this is a good reason to make a list when we go to the shop.
✓ So that's why this is a good reason to make a list when we go to the shop.
No correction needed here; the sentence is grammatically correct.
× I prefer to make at least on my telephone because it's easy way and we usually go out and taking with telephone with us.
✓ I prefer to make at least one list on my telephone because it's an easy way and we usually go out and take the telephone with us.
The phrase 'at least on my telephone' is incorrect; it should be 'at least one list on my telephone'. 'Easy way' needs the article 'an'. 'Taking with telephone with us' is incorrect; it should be 'take the telephone with us'.
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