List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me buy only the important items and manage my budget effectively, preventing me from overspending on unnecessary things.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi như 'a plans' hay câu hỏi không rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a weekly plan to list important tasks I need to complete. This method helps me manage my time efficiently and stay organized.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có phần thiếu lịch sự và không tự nhiên khi dùng từ 'lazy'. Bạn nên dùng cách diễn đạt nhẹ nhàng hơn và cung cấp lý do cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Some people might avoid making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous or believe they can remember tasks without writing them down.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và kết thúc không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi và giải thích rõ hơn về lý do lựa chọn.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check my list anytime and update it as needed.

× I can follow on that list when I go shopping to buy the important things and manage my money that make me don't cause excessive spending on the thing I don't really want to buy.

✓ I can follow that list when I go shopping to buy the important things and manage my money so that I don't cause excessive spending on things I don't really want to buy.

The phrase 'follow on that list' is incorrect; 'follow that list' is correct. Also, 'that make me don't cause' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'so that I don't cause' to express purpose and avoid double negatives. Additionally, 'the thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.

× I usually have a plans before a week to remain.

✓ I usually have plans for the upcoming week.

The phrase 'a plans' is incorrect because 'plans' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'before a week to remain' is awkward and unclear; 'for the upcoming week' is a clearer expression.

× What is the important things I need to do to finish in that week?

✓ What are the important things I need to do to finish in that week?

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× And of course it's very important with me because it helped me a lot to manage my time.

✓ And of course it's very important to me because it helps me a lot to manage my time.

The correct preposition is 'to' not 'with' when expressing importance to someone. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I think that maybe they are lazy and the mindset of them, maybe they think that they can do everything without making lists and they can do anything.

✓ I think that maybe they are lazy and their mindset is that they can do everything without making lists and can do anything.

'The mindset of them' is incorrect; the possessive pronoun 'their' should be used. Also, the sentence is repetitive; simplifying improves clarity.

× Whatever they like to do at that time, they don't need to be very hard working.

✓ Whatever they like to do at that time, they don't need to work very hard.

'Hard working' is an adjective; the correct adverbial phrase here is 'work very hard' to describe the action.

× Personally, I think that I would choose make a list on my phone because that my phone is indispensable and I will bring it to everywhere I go so I can check it anytime I want and I can like.

✓ Personally, I think that I would choose to make a list on my phone because my phone is indispensable and I bring it everywhere I go so I can check it anytime I want and I like that.

The verb 'choose' should be followed by 'to make' (infinitive). 'That my phone' should be 'my phone'. 'Bring it to everywhere' is incorrect; 'bring it everywhere' is correct. The sentence ending 'and I can like' is incomplete and should be 'and I like that' for clarity.