List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more clear and structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, instead of 'what to buy and what to know', say 'what items to buy'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what items to buy. This way, I avoid forgetting important things and save time in the store.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Focus on answering directly and use linking words to explain why making a list works. Avoid confusing phrases like 'If I'm not mentalist'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I avoid buying unnecessary items and save money.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words. For example, explain that some people find lists unnecessary or prefer to shop spontaneously.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop spontaneously. Also, they might find lists time-consuming or unnecessary if they have enough money to buy whatever they want.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better linking. Use phrases like 'because' and 'so' correctly and avoid uncertain words like 'maybe'.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and I always have my phone with me. So, I don't need to carry paper, which can be lost or damaged easily.

× Because even when I was go there, I was quite confused at what to buy and what to not because when we are going somewhere we actually don't.

✓ Because even when I was going there, I was quite confused about what to buy and what not to buy because when we go somewhere we actually don't.

The verb 'go' should be in the present participle form 'going' after 'was' to form the past continuous tense. Also, 'confused at' should be 'confused about'. The phrase 'what to not' is incorrect; it should be 'what not to buy'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Because even when I was go there, I was quite confused at what to buy and what to not because when we are going somewhere we actually don't.

✓ Because even when I was going there, I was quite confused about what to buy and what not to buy because when we go somewhere we actually don't.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'confused'; the correct preposition is 'about'. This change improves the grammatical correctness and clarity of the sentence.

× If I'm not mentalist, I know that I made a unnecessary purchases leads to more.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, I know that I made unnecessary purchases which lead to more.

The word 'mentalist' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'mistaken'. 'A unnecessary purchases' is incorrect because 'purchases' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'leads' should be 'lead' to agree with the plural subject 'purchases'. The sentence is corrected for proper pronoun and verb agreement.

× If I'm not mentalist, I know that I made a unnecessary purchases leads to more.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, I know that I made unnecessary purchases which lead to more.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'purchases'. Articles should agree in number with the noun they modify. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× Maybe they don't have or want to make the purchases about thinking of money at a time living there's a there's a they have a money and there are time move to do the shopping in a easy way.

✓ Maybe they don't want to make purchases because they are thinking about money at the moment. They have money and time to shop easily, so it depends on the person.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It contains redundant phrases and incorrect structure. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it's depend on the people.

✓ So it depends on the people.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. The preposition 'on' is correctly used here.

× So it's depend on the people.

✓ So it depends on the people.

The verb 'depend' must be conjugated as 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in the present tense.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because maybe papers maybe replaced only or it may be feel weird to carry a paper on anywhere, so the phone is quite better and easily accessible.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because papers may get lost or it may feel weird to carry paper anywhere, so the phone is better and easily accessible.

The preposition 'on' before 'anywhere' is incorrect and should be removed. Also, 'papers maybe replaced only' is unclear and corrected to 'papers may get lost' for clarity. The sentence is rephrased for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× so the phone is quite better and easily accessible.

✓ so the phone is better and more easily accessible.

The adverb 'quite' is not typically used with comparative adjectives like 'better'. Also, 'easily' should be modified to 'more easily' to correctly compare accessibility.