List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrases that affect naturalness and clarity. For example, "drawing it on my mind" is unclear, and "avoiding by unnecessary things" is incorrect. Try to use more precise expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping, either by writing it down or making a note on my phone. This helps me plan ahead and stay organised so I don't forget any important items. For example, having a clear list saves me time in the store and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains several unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes, such as "make lids" instead of "make lists", and "brought it prioritize" which is confusing. To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details about how the list helps you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make lists for my work. Every morning before I start, I write down all the tasks I need to complete that day on my computer or phone. Then, I prioritise them according to their deadlines to ensure I finish everything on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question well but ends abruptly and has some grammatical errors, such as "organizing their task" (should be plural) and incomplete sentence at the end. To improve, complete your examples and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organising their tasks. Additionally, lists can add unnecessary pressure by constantly reminding them of unfinished work. For example, individuals who enjoy flexibility might see lists as limiting their freedom.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are minor grammatical errors such as "that's come" instead of "that comes" and "crossing up tasks" which should be "crossing off tasks". Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the sense of accomplishment that comes from physically crossing off tasks as I complete them. Moreover, writing things down by hand makes it easier for me to remember important tasks, which helps me stay organised and motivated throughout the day.

× This help me plan ahead and stay organized so I don't forget any important items.

✓ This helps me plan ahead and stay organized so I don't forget any important items.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the subject.

× For example, by having a clear list I can save time in the store and avoiding by unnecessary things.

✓ For example, by having a clear list I can save time in the store and avoid unnecessary things.

After the modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'avoid' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'avoiding'. Also, 'by' before 'unnecessary things' is incorrect and should be removed.

× Yes, I often make lids for my work.

✓ Yes, I often make lists for my work.

The word 'lids' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'lists' to match the context of making lists.

× My notebook and I brought it prioritize them in order of reality deadline to ensure I finish everything on time it might have.

✓ I use my notebook to prioritise them in order of their real deadlines to ensure I finish everything on time.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure and word choice.

× Some people dislike making lists because they find it restricted and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their task.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organising their tasks.

'Restricted' is an adjective meaning limited, but 'restrictive' better describes something that limits freedom. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'their'.

× For example, individual who enjoy flexibility might see.

✓ For example, individuals who enjoy flexibility might see it that way.

'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with the plural verb 'enjoy'. The sentence was incomplete, so 'it that way' is added for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the sense of accomplishment that's come from physically crossing up tasks as I complete them.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the sense of accomplishment that comes from physically crossing off tasks as I complete them.

The phrase 'that's come' should be 'that comes' to match present tense. Also, the correct phrasal verb is 'crossing off', not 'crossing up'.

× It help me stay organized and motivated throughout the day.

✓ It helps me stay organised and motivated throughout the day.

The singular subject 'It' requires the verb 'helps' in third person singular form. Also, 'organized' is spelled 'organised' in British English.