Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I do. I always uh make a list when I shop because this make me feel more easier uh, to search or to know what the things or what, what the things that I have to buy.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes I do, I always make a list of your of my work every day. Yes of course it's work for me because when I lease my work it's make me more easier when I do my list or every day my activity.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
OK, in my opinion, maybe some people don't making list because it's too difficult to them for them to make a list. Or maybe they just do what they want so they don't make a list.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Because it's a digital era, I prefer to make a list on my phone then on paper because on my phone I always bring my phone where I am so I can actually list and then.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta singkat. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and makes shopping easier.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan efektif. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari kesalahan kata.
Ejemplo: Yes, I make a daily work list. It helps me organize my tasks and makes my work easier to manage.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Berikan alasan yang lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk memperjelas jawaban.
Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they find it difficult or prefer to be spontaneous without planning.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lebih lengkap dan jelas. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari kalimat yang tidak selesai.
Ejemplo: Since we live in a digital era, I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily add items anytime.
× Yes, I do. I always uh make a list when I shop because this make me feel more easier uh, to search or to know what the things or what, what the things that I have to buy.
✓ Yes, I do. I always uh make a list when I shop because this makes me feel easier uh, to search or to know what things I have to buy.
The subject 'this' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular). Also, 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is redundant. 'The things or what, what the things' is redundant and awkward; it should be simplified to 'what things'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena subjek tunggal harus diikuti oleh kata kerja bentuk ketiga tunggal dan penggunaan komparatif yang benar tanpa pengulangan kata 'more'.
× Yes I do, I always make a list of your of my work every day. Yes of course it's work for me because when I lease my work it's make me more easier when I do my list or every day my activity.
✓ Yes, I do. I always make a list of my work every day. Yes, of course it works for me because when I list my work it makes it easier when I do my list or my daily activities.
'Your of my work' is incorrect; it should be 'my work'. 'It's work' should be 'it works' (third person singular). 'Lease' is incorrect; the intended word is 'list'. 'It's make me more easier' should be 'it makes it easier' (correct verb form and comparative adjective without 'more'). 'Every day my activity' should be 'my daily activities' for clarity. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan kata ganti yang salah, bentuk kata kerja yang tidak sesuai dengan subjek, dan penggunaan kata yang salah serta struktur kalimat yang kurang tepat.
× OK, in my opinion, maybe some people don't making list because it's too difficult to them for them to make a list.
✓ OK, in my opinion, maybe some people don't make lists because it's too difficult for them to make a list.
After 'don't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'don't making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make'. Also, 'to them for them' is redundant; 'for them' is sufficient. 'Making list' should be pluralized to 'make lists' to generalize. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan bentuk kata kerja yang salah setelah 'don't' dan redundansi preposisi.
× OK, in my opinion, maybe some people don't making list because it's too difficult to them for them to make a list.
✓ OK, in my opinion, maybe some people don't make lists because it's too difficult for them to make a list.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to people in general who do not make lists. This is a pluralization issue. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan bentuk jamak yang tepat untuk kata benda ketika berbicara secara umum.
× Yes I do, I always make a list of your of my work every day.
✓ Yes, I do. I always make a list of my work every day.
The phrase 'of your of my work' is incorrect due to redundant prepositions and possessive pronouns. It should be simplified to 'of my work'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan preposisi dan kata ganti kepemilikan yang tidak tepat dan berlebihan.
× Or maybe they just do what they want so they don't make a list.
✓ Or maybe they just do what they want, so they don't make lists.
When referring to people in general, 'make lists' (plural) is more appropriate than 'make a list' (singular) to indicate the habitual action. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan bentuk jamak yang tepat untuk kata benda ketika berbicara secara umum.
× Because it's a digital era, I prefer to make a list on my phone then on paper because on my phone I always bring my phone where I am so I can actually list and then.
✓ Because it's a digital era, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I always carry my phone wherever I am, so I can actually make a list anytime.
The sentence has awkward structure and word choice: 'then' should be 'rather than' for comparison; 'bring my phone where I am' should be 'carry my phone wherever I am'; 'I can actually list and then' is incomplete and unclear, corrected to 'I can actually make a list anytime'. Kesalahan ini karena struktur kalimat yang tidak tepat dan pilihan kata yang kurang sesuai sehingga makna menjadi tidak jelas.