Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, but not very often. I make a list when I shop when I need to buy a lot of things and it can remind me what I have take and what I I need to take.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I have been making lists for my work since I was in grade 12. It really helps me stay organised and improves my study efficiency significantly. Umm, for example, by listening my tasks, I can prioritize better and avoid getting important assignments.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel a little bit stressed or pressured and also make list making list maybe let them feel the less limited their limit, their freedom.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can it it is easy to change or. Restore, I mean change a little and it is more easy to take everywhere.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复,表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。
Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I have many items to buy. It helps me remember what I have already picked and what I still need to get.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,如“listening my tasks”应为“listing my tasks”。建议使用更准确的表达,并增加连接词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: Yes, I have been making lists for my work since grade 12. It helps me stay organized and improves my study efficiency. For example, by listing my tasks, I can prioritize them better and avoid missing important assignments.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答表达不清晰,语法混乱,影响理解。建议简化句子,明确表达观点,避免重复和错误。
Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because it makes them feel stressed or pressured. They may also feel that lists limit their freedom.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇和句式,使表达更自然。
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to edit them and I can carry my phone anywhere.
× I make a list when I shop when I need to buy a lot of things and it can remind me what I have take and what I I need to take.
✓ I make a list when I shop when I need to buy a lot of things and it can remind me what I have taken and what I need to take.
这里的动词时态错误,'have take' 应该用过去分词形式 'have taken',因为这是现在完成时的结构。建议记住现在完成时的构成是 'have/has + 过去分词'。
× by listening my tasks, I can prioritize better and avoid getting important assignments.
✓ by listing my tasks, I can prioritize better and avoid missing important assignments.
这里 'listening my tasks' 用词错误,应该是 'listing my tasks',表示列出任务;另外 'avoid getting important assignments' 语义不通,应该是 'avoid missing important assignments',避免错过重要任务。建议注意动词搭配和词义。
× and also make list making list maybe let them feel the less limited their limit, their freedom.
✓ and also making lists may make them feel less limited in their freedom.
句子结构混乱,代词使用不当,'make list making list' 重复且不通顺,'the less limited their limit' 语法错误。建议简化句子,正确使用代词和形容词,表达“让他们感觉自由受限较少”。
× it is more easy to take everywhere.
✓ it is easier to take everywhere.
'more easy' 是错误的比较级形式,正确的比较级是 'easier'。建议记住单音节形容词比较级直接加 '-er'。