List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'making a less' instead of 'making a list' and 'in a higher efficacy' instead of 'more efficiently'. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by keeping your answer concise and structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because my family has seven members, so I need to buy many items. Making a list helps me shop more efficiently and ensures I don't forget anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes and confusing phrases like 'people very demand for her schedule' and 'make a list for my walking'. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because I have a busy schedule. It helps me organise my tasks efficiently and reminds me to complete everything on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'making less' instead of 'making lists' and repetitive words. Try to use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by specific reasons, using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it complicated and time-consuming. They prefer to do tasks spontaneously rather than planning everything in advance.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'making lays' and 'make detail less'. Try to express your preference clearly with correct grammar and provide specific reasons using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I used to make lists on paper before I had a smartphone. Now, I prefer using apps because they can send reminders and help me keep track of all my tasks easily.

× Of course, because my family has seven members so I need to buy so many things every time I go shopping and I think making a less can help me buy things in a higher efficacy.

✓ Of course, because my family has seven members, so I need to buy many things every time I go shopping and I think making a list can help me buy things more efficiently.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'list'. Also, 'so many things' is acceptable but 'many things' is more natural in this context. 'In a higher efficacy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'more efficiently' to describe the manner of buying things.

× Well as a people very demand for her schedule. I always make a list for my walking and I think it's help it's necessary for me to make detailed schedule and help me walk more efficiently.

✓ Well, as a person with a very demanding schedule, I always make a list for my work and I think it helps; it's necessary for me to make a detailed schedule and it helps me work more efficiently.

The phrase 'as a people very demand for her schedule' is incorrect; it should be 'as a person with a very demanding schedule'. 'My walking' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'my work'. 'It's help' should be 'it helps'. Also, 'make detailed schedule' needs an article: 'make a detailed schedule'. 'Help me walk' should be 'help me work' to match the context.

× Also it can remind me finish all of tasks in time.

✓ Also, it can remind me to finish all of the tasks on time.

The verb 'remind' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'remind me to finish'. 'All of tasks' is incorrect; it should be 'all of the tasks'. 'In time' is better expressed as 'on time' when referring to deadlines.

× Well, I think for majority of people who who doesn't like making less, maybe they think it it complex and difficult to make everything that they should remind or they need to do and they think it's easy to just do it.

✓ Well, I think for the majority of people who don't like making lists, maybe they think it is complex and difficult to make everything that they should remember or need to do, and they think it's easier to just do it.

'For majority of people' needs the definite article: 'for the majority of people'. 'Who doesn't' should be 'who don't' to agree with plural 'people'. 'Making less' should be 'making lists'. 'It it complex' should be 'it is complex'. 'Should remind' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember'. 'It's easy' should be 'it's easier' to compare with 'just do it'.

× Well, I use I used to making lays on papers when I without smartphones, but now I usually use the apps to make detail less because it can remind me by alarming in the smartphone and I can remember all of task to finish.

✓ Well, I used to make lists on paper when I didn't have a smartphone, but now I usually use apps to make detailed lists because they can remind me by alarming on the smartphone and I can remember all of the tasks to finish.

'I use I used to making lays' is incorrect; it should be 'I used to make lists'. 'On papers' should be 'on paper'. 'When I without smartphones' should be 'when I didn't have a smartphone'. 'Make detail less' should be 'make detailed lists'. 'It can remind me by alarming in the smartphone' should be 'they can remind me by alarming on the smartphone'. 'All of task' should be 'all of the tasks'.