List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to use simpler and correct sentences, and avoid repetition. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid forgetting items.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid forgetting items.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct verb forms. For example, say 'Yes, I make lists for my work, but they don't always help because I prefer to work freely without strict schedules.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work, but they don't always help because I prefer to work freely without strict schedules.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammar mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they find it extra work, or they have a good memory and prefer to remember things without writing.'

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it extra work, or they have a good memory and prefer to remember things without writing.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because if I lose paper, I lose my schedule. Also, phone lists are saved securely and save money since I don't need to buy paper.'

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because if I lose paper, I lose my schedule. Also, phone lists are saved securely and save money since I don't need to buy paper.

× Yes I do as it helps me to buy a product sincerely and and it make easier to remember.

✓ Yes, I do as it helps me to buy a product sincerely and it makes it easier to remember.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'and and' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'and'.

× Yes, I do list for my work but it actually doesn't work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work but it actually doesn't work.

The verb 'do list' is incorrect; it should be 'do make a list' to correctly express the action. The pronoun usage is fine but the verb phrase is incomplete.

× Actually I am a person who don't care about schedule so it I I like freedom actually.

✓ Actually, I am a person who doesn't care about schedules, so I like freedom actually.

The verb 'don't' should be 'doesn't' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. Also, 'schedule' should be plural 'schedules' to generalize the meaning. The phrase 'so it I I like freedom actually' is corrected to 'so I like freedom actually' for clarity.

× Actually people who are not a regular, maybe they don't like some, they don't like making list as it kind of extra work for making list or maybe they are they are memorizing power is very very good.

✓ Actually, people who are not regular may not like making lists as it is kind of extra work, or maybe their memorizing power is very good.

The phrase 'not a regular' is incorrect; it should be 'not regular'. 'Don't like some' is unclear and removed for clarity. 'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'. 'They are they are memorizing power' is incorrect; corrected to 'their memorizing power'.

× I prefer a phone than the paper.

✓ I prefer the phone to the paper.

The article 'a' before 'phone' is incorrect when comparing specific items; 'the' is appropriate. Also, the preposition 'than' should be 'to' in this context of preference.

× If I don't on the paper if the paper is lost then my my schedule will be lost.

✓ If I don't use the paper, and if the paper is lost, then my schedule will be lost.

The phrase 'don't on the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'don't use the paper'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding conjunctions and commas for clarity.

× So it could it could messed up my schedule.

✓ So it could mess up my schedule.

The verb 'messed' is past tense; after modal 'could', the base form 'mess' should be used.

× So if I turn on the phone there is no way to erase that data and it also save money as there need no money to buy paper.

✓ So if I turn on the phone, there is no way to erase that data and it also saves money as there is no need to buy paper.

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'there need no money' is incorrect; it should be 'there is no need'. Commas are added for clarity.