List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid minor grammatical errors, such as 'new product' should be 'new products'. Also, adding a linking word to connect your ideas will make your response more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting important items. However, I often end up buying things that aren't on my list because I get tempted by new products or special offers.

Sugerencia: Your answer is well-structured and detailed. To enhance it further, try to use linking words such as 'therefore' or 'which means that' to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, consider varying your vocabulary to avoid repetition, for example, instead of repeating 'list', you could say 'task plan' or 'schedule'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually create a detailed list for my work, which really helps me stay organized and focused throughout the day. At the beginning of each week, I prepare a task plan along with their deadlines; therefore, I can work more efficiently and avoid forgetting important tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is thoughtful and includes examples, which is good. To improve, try to use more varied linking words such as 'therefore' instead of 'so because of this' for smoother flow. Also, avoid redundancy by combining sentences where possible.

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to have more flexibility in their daily routines. For example, they might feel that a list restricts their ability to adapt to unexpected changes; therefore, they avoid being bound by a fixed plan and prefer to decide what to do spontaneously.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and personal, which is good. However, to improve, avoid sentence fragments like 'Although using my phone is more convenient.' Instead, combine it with the previous sentence for better coherence. Also, try to use linking words such as 'however' or 'but' to connect contrasting ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to organize my thoughts that way. Writing things down by hand helps me remember tasks better, and I enjoy the feeling of physically crossing items off the list. However, I know that using my phone is more convenient, but I'm quite old school and like the traditional method.

× However, I often end up buying things that aren't on my list because I get tempted by new product or special offers.

✓ However, I often end up buying things that aren't on my list because I get tempted by new products or special offers.

The phrase 'new product' should be plural 'new products' to match the plural noun 'special offers' and to correctly express multiple items. Using singular 'product' here is incorrect because it implies only one product, which is inconsistent with the context.