List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构有些不自然，且有重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ejemplo: Yes, I occasionally make a shopping list to avoid forgetting items and to prevent impulse purchases.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态使用不准确，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达观点，并避免口语化的填充词。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have made lists for work to improve efficiency, but I found it time-consuming and difficult to maintain, so I stopped.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较完整，但有重复和口头语。建议减少重复，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they don't know how to prioritize tasks properly, and sometimes the lists become ineffective, leading them to give up.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但有语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议注意动词形式和简化句子。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone often distracts me with messages, so paper helps me focus better.

× And making a list is also a great way to avoid impulse buying or I will buy a lot of things that I don't need.

✓ And making a list is also a great way to avoid impulse buying, or else I will buy a lot of things that I don't need.

这里的句子结构不完整，缺少连接词“or else”来表达因果关系，应该用连词连接两个完整的句子。

× Yes, I'd done it before.

✓ Yes, I've done it before.

这里使用过去完成时（I'd done）不合适，因为句子表达的是过去某个时间之前的经历，应该用现在完成时（I've done）。

× But somehow I found out that making a list for me is not, it's actually not a great study habit because it wastes me a lot of time and I won't keep up with it.

✓ But somehow I found out that making a list for me is actually not a great study habit because it wastes a lot of my time and I can't keep up with it.

“wastes me a lot of time”中“wastes me”用法错误，应该是“wastes a lot of my time”，即“浪费了我很多时间”。另外，“I won't keep up with it”时态不合适，改为“I can't keep up with it”更符合语境。

× I think there are two main reasons. The first one, umm they don't know how to make a list, like they don't know how to prioritize the task and just put a big topic on it and they couldn't make it.

✓ I think there are two main reasons. The first one, umm they don't know how to make a list, like they don't know how to prioritize the tasks and just put a big topic on it and they can't make it.

“prioritize the task”应为复数“tasks”，因为通常有多个任务需要排序；“couldn't make it”时态不合适，应该用现在时“can't make it”表示一般情况。

× And the second one, umm they they don't know how to use it and somehow the list become useless so they gave up.

✓ And the second one, umm they don't know how to use it and somehow the list becomes useless so they give up.

“the list become useless”主谓不一致，应该用第三人称单数“becomes”；“they gave up”时态不合适，应该用一般现在时“they give up”表示习惯性动作。

× So I usually just making a list on paper.

✓ So I usually just make a list on paper.

“usually”后面应接动词原形，“just making”语法错误，应改为“just make”。