List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and repetition such as 'I forget, umm, I forget'. Also, aim to be more concise and clear by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, you can say: 'Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. For instance, once I forgot to make a list and ended up buying things I didn't need while missing some essentials.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details. For example, start with a topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you meet deadlines. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many deadlines each day. By organizing my tasks this way, I can prioritize effectively and complete everything on time.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with clear reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because it is not their habit, and they find it unnecessary.'

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because it is not their habit, and they feel it takes extra time. Additionally, they may prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but some sentences are unclear or grammatically incorrect. Avoid starting sentences with 'And however' and clarify your points. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' properly. Also, be concise and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I have my notebook with me, I prefer to write the list there because it feels more organized and easier to review. However, if I don't have my notebook, I use my phone since it is convenient and always with me.

× Yes, I always make a list when I want to go to shopping and it it helps me to umm, buy everything that I want.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I want to go shopping and it helps me to, umm, buy everything that I want.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is a gerund and does not require the preposition 'to' after 'go'. The correct form is 'go shopping'. Also, the repeated word 'it' was removed for clarity.

× And I remember at the time when I didn't use a list, I forget, umm, I forget to buy something and I buy an unnecessary thing.

✓ And I remember at the time when I didn't use a list, I forgot, umm, I forgot to buy something and I bought an unnecessary thing.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verbs 'forget' and 'buy' should be in the past tense 'forgot' and 'bought' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes I do because I have many deadlines in the day and if I make a list I can reach it all in a day.

✓ Yes, I do because I have many deadlines during the day and if I make a list I can reach them all in a day.

The phrase 'in the day' is less natural than 'during the day' when referring to multiple deadlines within a day. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'deadlines'.

× OK. First thing first, I think because it their habit and secondly it's not unusual activity for them.

✓ OK. First things first, I think because it's their habit and secondly it's not an unusual activity for them.

The phrase 'it their habit' is incorrect; it should be 'it's their habit' (it is). Also, 'First thing first' is corrected to 'First things first' which is the correct idiomatic expression. Additionally, 'not unusual activity' needs the article 'an' before 'unusual activity'.

× And however, if I don't have my notebook, I usually use my phone too.

✓ However, if I don't have my notebook, I usually use my phone too.

Using both 'And' and 'however' together is redundant and incorrect. 'However' alone is sufficient to introduce the contrast.

× Quick notebook down to the list since its convenience and always with me.

✓ I quickly note down the list because it's convenient and always with me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a subject and proper verb form. The corrected sentence adds the subject 'I', uses the adverb 'quickly' correctly, and clarifies the meaning with proper structure.