Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Uh, I always make a list when I buy something. Uh, it helps me don't forget anything important and saves time.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
I often make a leave for study. It helps me focus on my task and can manage my time better than in. I think it's efficient.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think it takes too much time and they they don't see the benefits of from making leaves. They they also think time consuming or.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a lease on my phone because they it came set reminder for important tasks and I always have my phone with me everywhere.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'helps me don't forget' nên sửa thành 'helps me not to forget'. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ lặp lại như 'uh' và cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me not to forget important items and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ 'make a leave' không đúng trong ngữ cảnh này, bạn nên dùng 'make a list'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, cần sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me focus on my tasks and manage my time more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'making leaves' nên là 'making lists'. Bạn cần tránh lặp từ và hoàn thành câu đầy đủ để ý nghĩa rõ ràng hơn.
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and they don't see the benefits of doing so.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Bạn đã sử dụng từ sai 'make a lease' thay vì 'make a list'. Câu trả lời cũng thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'they it came set reminder'. Bạn nên sửa lại câu cho rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn.
Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can set reminders for important tasks, and I always have my phone with me.
× Uh, it helps me don't forget anything important and saves time.
✓ Uh, it helps me not forget anything important and saves time.
The phrase 'helps me don't forget' is incorrect because after 'help', the verb should be in the base form or 'not' + base form, not 'don't'. The correct form is 'helps me not forget'.
× I often make a leave for study.
✓ I often make a list for study.
The word 'leave' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'list'. 'Leave' means time off, but the context requires 'list'.
× It helps me focus on my task and can manage my time better than in.
✓ It helps me focus on my task and manage my time better than before.
The phrase 'better than in' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct phrase is 'better than before' to indicate improvement over previous time.
× I think it takes too much time and they they don't see the benefits of from making leaves.
✓ I think it takes too much time and they don't see the benefits of making lists.
The phrase 'benefits of from making leaves' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'benefits of making lists'. Also, 'leaves' should be 'lists'.
× They they also think time consuming or.
✓ They also think it is time consuming.
The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence completes the thought properly.
× I prefer to make a lease on my phone because they it came set reminder for important tasks and I always have my phone with me everywhere.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it can set reminders for important tasks and I always have my phone with me everywhere.
The word 'lease' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. Also, 'they it came set reminder' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it can set reminders'.