Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Not really, I just walk around and put whatever I see in the cart. I know it's isn't a good way to shop, but making lists isn't my habit.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, making lists give me the energy and focus I need to stay productive. They lifts, they lift my spirits and put me in the good mood.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think maybe that they just believe they will remember everythings.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Just my phone, I use it all the time. Anyway I can input by typing or voice.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误,如"it's isn't"应为"it isn't",且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,同时增加连贯性。
Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to choose items spontaneously as I walk around the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误,如"give"应为"gives","They lifts"应为"They lift"。建议注意主谓一致,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ejemplo: Yes, making lists gives me the energy and focus I need to stay productive. They also lift my spirits and put me in a good mood.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误,如"everythings"应为"everything",且表达不够完整。建议补充原因并使用更准确的词汇。
Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything without writing it down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答较为简洁,但表达略显口语化。建议使用完整句子,并增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use it all the time, and I can input items either by typing or using voice commands.
× I know it's isn't a good way to shop, but making lists isn't my habit.
✓ I know it isn't a good way to shop, but making lists isn't my habit.
句中"it's isn't"是重复使用助动词,正确形式应为"it isn't"。这是典型的存在动词错误,需去掉多余的助动词。
× Yes, making lists give me the energy and focus I need to stay productive.
✓ Yes, making lists gives me the energy and focus I need to stay productive.
主语"making lists"是单数形式,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"gives",这是单复数一致错误。
× They lifts, they lift my spirits and put me in the good mood.
✓ They lift my spirits and put me in a good mood.
"They lifts"主谓不一致,应为"They lift"。此外,"in the good mood"中"the"使用不当,应为不定冠词"a",但冠词错误属于另一类型,这里主要纠正主谓一致。
× I think maybe that they just believe they will remember everythings.
✓ I think maybe that they just believe they will remember everything.
"everythings"是错误的复数形式,"everything"是不可数代词,不能加复数形式。属于单复数错误。