List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains many repetitions and grammatical errors, which affect clarity and naturalness. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Also, be more concise and clear in your explanation.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need and manage my budget effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks explanation. Always provide a full response with reasons or examples to support your answer. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I prefer to keep tasks in my mind, but sometimes I use digital reminders to stay organized.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and repetitions. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid unnecessary questions within your answer and provide specific reasons.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory instead.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Clarify your preference clearly and provide reasons using linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: Nowadays, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily update them anytime.

× Yes, I make a list of when I go to shop because it it helps.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps.

The phrase 'make a list of when I go to shop' is incorrect. The correct preposition is omitted, and 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the gerund form after 'go'. Also, the repeated 'it' is a typographical error.

× It helps to me remember about about the which things we need to buy and and how and how much invest money on the good.

✓ It helps me remember which things we need to buy and how much money to invest in the goods.

The phrase 'helps to me remember' is incorrect; 'helps me remember' is correct. The preposition 'about' is unnecessary before 'which things'. 'Invest money on the good' should be 'invest money in the goods' to use the correct preposition and plural form.

× I don't I don't make a list for work because.

✓ I don't make a list for work because I find it unnecessary.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repetition. It needs a complete reason after 'because' to form a proper sentence.

× According to me, don't some people like making list?

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists.

'According to me' is incorrect; 'In my opinion' is the correct phrase. The sentence structure is incorrect; the negative auxiliary 'don't' should be placed after the subject 'some people'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' (plural).

× Because in this modern era people people have don't do not habit of making lists.

✓ Because in this modern era, people do not have the habit of making lists.

The phrase 'have don't do not habit' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'do not have the habit'. Also, 'people people' is a repetition error.

× So that's why people don't making lists in nowadays.

✓ So that's why people don't make lists nowadays.

After 'don't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'making' is incorrect; it should be 'make'. Also, 'in nowadays' is incorrect; 'nowadays' alone is sufficient.

× In this modern era, I prefer to make a list on paper on our mobile phone because because we we, we make a list in the comfort zone and it is best for me.

✓ In this modern era, I prefer to make a list on paper or on my mobile phone because we make lists in a comfortable way, and it is best for me.

The preposition 'on' is correct for 'on paper' and 'on my mobile phone', but 'on our mobile phone' is inconsistent with 'I prefer'. 'Or' is better than repeating 'on'. 'Make a list in the comfort zone' is awkward; 'make lists in a comfortable way' is clearer. Also, repeated words 'because because' and 'we we' are errors.