List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy in your answer. Use clear and concise sentences, and organise your ideas logically. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember all the essential grocery items. This way, I avoid forgetting anything important and save time while shopping.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases and try to provide specific examples. Use linking words to explain your points clearly.

Ejemplo: It depends on the task. For important jobs like maintaining my house or office, I make a list, which helps me stay organised. However, for grocery shopping, sometimes I forget to include some items on the list, so it is less effective.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Provide a clear reason with supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: People have different opinions about making lists. Some think it wastes time and effort, so they prefer not to make lists because they find it unnecessary.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

Ejemplo: Due to advances in technology, I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. In contrast, paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten, which makes digital lists more reliable.

× I always make a list when I go to the shopping because if I if I prepare a list before going to shopping, it is very useful because I already noted all the essential items like grocery items in my list, which is really precious to me.

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping because if I prepare a list before going shopping, it is very useful since I have already noted all the essential items like grocery items in my list, which is really precious to me.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct expression using the verb in the present participle form without 'to the'. Also, 'already noted' should be 'have already noted' to correctly use the present perfect tense indicating a past action relevant to the present.

× Sometimes I make a list for very important work like maintenance of my house as well as maintenance of my office.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for very important work like maintaining my house as well as maintaining my office.

The noun 'maintenance' should be replaced with the verb in the present participle form 'maintaining' to correctly express the ongoing action related to the work.

× Sometimes I forget all the accession grocery items in my list.

✓ Sometimes I forget all the additional grocery items in my list.

The word 'accession' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'additional' to describe extra grocery items.

× Well it perception it varies from person to person.

✓ Well, perception varies from person to person.

The phrase 'it perception it' is incorrect; the subject should be 'perception' alone without 'it' pronouns.

× Some people do not like making lists because they have thing that making list of things is the wastage of times and it consume lot of time as well as lot of efforts.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because they think that making a list of things is a waste of time and consumes a lot of time as well as a lot of effort.

The phrase 'they have thing' is incorrect; it should be 'they think'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making a list'. 'Wastage of times' should be 'waste of time'. 'It consume' should be 'it consumes' to agree with singular subject. 'Lot of efforts' should be 'a lot of effort' as 'effort' is uncountable here.

× So that's why they do not make list and and.

✓ So that's why they do not make lists.

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' to be plural and complete the thought.

× I always prefer to make list on phone because we never we never forget to, we never forget to use the phone as well as if we make the list on paper, it is very risk because sometimes we forget the paper as well as lose the paper.

✓ I always prefer to make lists on my phone because we never forget to use the phone, whereas if we make the list on paper, it is very risky because sometimes we forget or lose the paper.

The phrase 'make list on phone' should be 'make lists on my phone' to use correct article and possessive pronoun. 'It is very risk' should be 'it is very risky' to use the correct adjective form. Also, 'as well as' is better replaced with 'whereas' to contrast the two situations properly.