List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is incomplete and ends abruptly. To improve, ensure your answers are complete and avoid trailing off. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me prioritise what I really need and avoid unnecessary spending. For instance, when I shop for groceries, I write down essential items like vegetables and milk, which ensures I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are minor grammatical errors and the linking between ideas could be smoother. To improve, use correct verb forms and linking words such as 'which' or 'so that' to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list of my work because organising my activities helps me stay productive and efficient. This way, I can attend to urgent tasks first, followed by less important ones, which improves my overall workflow.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. To improve, use correct subject-verb agreement and clarify your points with precise language. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Even though making lists is effective, some people dislike them because they feel it is time-consuming. They believe that the time spent creating a to-do list could be better used to complete tasks directly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains grammatical errors. To improve, complete your sentences fully and use singular/plural forms correctly. Also, include linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific examples of the benefits.

Ejemplo: I prefer to organise my activities on my phone rather than using paper because it offers assistive technologies such as reminders and notifications. For example, my phone can alert me about upcoming tasks and allows me to add new activities easily when they arise.

× For instance, when I need to get groceries for household items, what I do is to note down the things I.

✓ For instance, when I need to get groceries for household items, what I do is note down the things I need.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly, causing a sentence structure error. The phrase 'what I do is to note down the things I' lacks a completion. The correction completes the sentence by adding 'need' to clarify the action. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Organizing my activities help me to stay productive and efficient.

✓ Organizing my activities helps me to stay productive and efficient.

The subject 'Organizing my activities' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be singular 'helps' instead of 'help'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Correcting the verb to 'helps' ensures agreement with the singular subject.

× It also enables me to attend to urgent activity first, then followed by the ones that are least important.

✓ It also enables me to attend to urgent activity first, then follow with the ones that are least important.

The phrase 'then followed by' is incorrect here because it lacks a proper verb form to continue the sequence. Using 'then follow with' maintains parallel verb structure and correct conjunction usage. This correction improves sentence flow and grammatical accuracy.

× Even though making lists have been found effective, some people don't like making lists because they feel it's time consuming.

✓ Even though making lists has been found effective, some people don't like making lists because they feel it's time consuming.

The subject 'making lists' is singular as a gerund phrase acting as a singular noun, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Correcting to 'has' ensures proper agreement.

× The additional time put into creating A to do of the activities you want to perform can be added and achieve other things.

✓ The additional time put into creating a to-do list of the activities you want to perform can be saved and used to achieve other things.

The original sentence is unclear and awkwardly structured, causing a sentence structure error. 'A to do of the activities' is incorrect phrasing. The correction clarifies the meaning by specifying 'a to-do list' and uses appropriate verbs 'saved and used' to convey the intended idea clearly.

× I prefer to organize my activities on my phone rather than the traditional use of paper because it offers assistive technologies such as reminders and notifications.

✓ I prefer to organize my activities on my phone rather than using traditional paper because it offers assistive technologies such as reminders and notifications.

The phrase 'the traditional use of paper' is awkward and incorrect quantifier usage. Replacing it with 'using traditional paper' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× This assistive technologies can track or add activities when there is new one so.

✓ These assistive technologies can track or add activities when there is a new one.

'This assistive technologies' is incorrect because 'technologies' is plural and should be preceded by 'these' not 'this'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'so' which is unnecessary. The correction fixes the demonstrative pronoun and completes the sentence properly.