List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais manque de fluidité et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et évitez les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple, simplifiez la phrase et corrigez les erreurs de temps et de vocabulaire.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember the items I need from the grocery store, so I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et contient des erreurs de grammaire et de structure. Essayez de formuler une réponse claire avec une phrase principale suivie d'une explication cohérente, en utilisant des temps corrects.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work, and it helps me complete all my tasks on time effectively.

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est correcte mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant un vocabulaire plus précis et en évitant les hésitations. Essayez d'expliquer davantage avec des exemples ou raisons spécifiques.

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and enjoy doing tasks spontaneously rather than following a fixed schedule.

Sugerencia: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et des répétitions. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et évitez de répéter les mêmes mots.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, unlike paper notes which I might forget or lose.

× Yes, when I shop I do make a list to remember what I should purchase from the grocery store and do not forgot any kind of supplement store to buy.

✓ Yes, when I shop I do make a list to remember what I should purchase from the grocery store and do not forget any kind of supplement store to buy.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but here it should be the base form 'forget' after 'do not' to form the negative present tense. The correct form is 'do not forget'.

× And yes, it's worked.

✓ And yes, it works.

The phrase 'it's worked' is incorrect because 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and 'worked' is past tense. The correct present tense form is 'it works' to match the context of ongoing effectiveness.

× It worked effectively and it helps me a lot to do every task in time and.

✓ It works effectively and it helps me a lot to do every task on time.

The sentence mixes past tense 'worked' with present tense 'helps'. To maintain consistency and match the context, 'worked' should be 'works'. Also, 'in time' should be 'on time' to correctly express punctuality.

× I think those people hate to be stuck in an order thing, and they want to do things randomly, not stuck in, uh, fixed things.

✓ I think those people hate to be stuck in an orderly thing, and they want to do things randomly, not stuck in fixed things.

The phrase 'an order thing' is incorrect; the adjective 'orderly' should be used to describe something arranged or organized. 'Orderly' is the correct adjective form here.

× I prefer making list on phone because I hold my phone always with me, not like papers thing.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me, unlike paper notes.

The phrase 'making list on phone' lacks the article 'a' and the possessive 'my'. Also, 'hold my phone always with me' is awkward; 'always have my phone with me' is more natural. 'Not like papers thing' is unclear; 'unlike paper notes' is clearer.

× Sometimes I forgot my papers somewhere but my phone is always with me so the notes will will be always with me.

✓ Sometimes I forget my papers somewhere but my phone is always with me so the notes will always be with me.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget'. Also, 'will will be always' has a repeated word and incorrect adverb placement; it should be 'will always be'.