Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, when I go shopping at home I will team the girls I will buy, but in when go to the supermarkets sometimes I forgot something to buy. So when the shoppings I always make at least 2.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, of course I always to to make my mind don't forget some things I will do. So when I make a list, I do it I'm confident and. Faster.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
With some people make a list they feel is not important and bored, but with some people they do root as their words so they don't need to make a list.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Happy fur make a list on my phone because I can bring phone to everywhere I go and when I forgot something I will turn on my phone and see what I should do next. So I prefer make a list on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need. However, sometimes I forget to bring the list, so I end up buying less or missing some items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc làm danh sách công việc.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. When I have a list, I feel more confident and can complete my work faster.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn.
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or think it's unnecessary. Others prefer to remember things in their own way, so they don't feel the need to write a list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc ngữ pháp đúng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, if I forget something, I can easily check my list anytime and anywhere.
× Yes, when I go shopping at home I will team the girls I will buy, but in when go to the supermarkets sometimes I forgot something to buy.
✓ Yes, when I go shopping at home I will tell the girls what I will buy, but when I go to the supermarkets sometimes I forget something to buy.
The original sentence uses 'team' which is incorrect; the correct verb is 'tell'. Also, 'in when go' is incorrect; it should be 'when I go'. The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget' because it refers to habitual action. The sentence also lacks the subject 'I' before 'go to the supermarkets'.
× So when the shoppings I always make at least 2.
✓ So when shopping, I always make at least two lists.
The word 'shoppings' is incorrect; 'shopping' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'lists' clarifies the meaning. The number '2' should be written as 'two' in formal writing.
× Yes, of course I always to to make my mind don't forget some things I will do.
✓ Yes, of course I always try to make up my mind so I don't forget some things I will do.
The phrase 'I always to to make my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'I always try to make up my mind'. The phrase 'don't forget some things I will do' needs 'so' to connect the clauses properly. The original sentence lacks proper verb forms and conjunctions.
× So when I make a list, I do it I'm confident and. Faster.
✓ So when I make a list, I do it confidently and faster.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'I do it I'm confident and. Faster.' is incorrect. It should be 'I do it confidently and faster' to correctly use the adverb form and connect the ideas.
× With some people make a list they feel is not important and bored, but with some people they do root as their words so they don't need to make a list.
✓ Some people feel making a list is not important and boring, but some people rely on their memory so they don't need to make a list.
The original sentence has incorrect structure and word choice. 'With some people make a list they feel is not important and bored' is incorrect; it should be 'Some people feel making a list is not important and boring'. 'They do root as their words' is unclear; 'rely on their memory' is the correct expression.
× Happy fur make a list on my phone because I can bring phone to everywhere I go and when I forgot something I will turn on my phone and see what I should do next.
✓ I am happy to make a list on my phone because I can bring my phone everywhere I go, and when I forget something I will turn on my phone and see what I should do next.
'Happy fur make' is incorrect; it should be 'I am happy to make'. 'Bring phone to everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'bring my phone everywhere'. 'When I forgot' should be 'when I forget' to match the present tense context.
× So I prefer make a list on my phone.
✓ So I prefer to make a list on my phone.
The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the bare verb 'make'. This is a common verb pattern in English.