List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating ideas. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural by linking ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need if I don't write it down. Moreover, I get easily distracted by attractive items in the store.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to explain why the list sometimes works and sometimes doesn't, providing specific reasons.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I make a list for my work, but it doesn't always help because I might forget to check it. However, it is still useful as it reminds me of important tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains a vocabulary mistake ('leaves' instead of 'lists') and is vague. Try to give a more thoughtful and specific reason, and check your word choice carefully.

Ejemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally rather than writing them down.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler sounds like 'umm' and 'mmm' and use correct prepositions. Also, explain your preference clearly and provide a reason with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I don't want to drain my phone's battery, and writing by hand helps me remember better.

× Yes, I will make a list when I shop. This is because I will always forgot what I would like to buy if I did not write it down as I will be attracted by the fancy things in.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop. This is because I always forget what I would like to buy if I do not write it down as I am attracted by the fancy things in the shop.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will' with 'forgot' which is past tense; 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context. Also, 'will be attracted' should be 'am attracted' to express a habitual action. The sentence should consistently use present tense to describe habitual actions.

× This is because I will always forgot what I would like to buy if I did not write it down as I will be attracted by the fancy things in.

✓ This is because I always forget what I would like to buy if I do not write it down as I am attracted by the fancy things in the shop.

The phrase 'attracted by the fancy things in' is incomplete and missing the object of the preposition 'in'. Adding 'the shop' completes the prepositional phrase and clarifies the meaning.

× Umm, sometimes I may make a list for my work, but most of the time the list doesn't really work.

✓ Umm, sometimes I make a list for my work, but most of the time the list doesn't really work.

The modal verb 'may' suggests possibility but is unnecessary here. Using the simple present 'make' better expresses the habitual action intended.

× However, the list still has some. Umm, it's still useful.

✓ However, the list still has some use. Umm, it's still useful.

The phrase 'the list still has some' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'use' clarifies the meaning that the list still has some usefulness.

× I don't know why some people don't like making leaves, or maybe they do not have pens and papers beside them.

✓ I don't know why some people don't like making lists, or maybe they do not have pens and paper beside them.

The word 'leaves' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. Also, 'papers' is generally uncountable in this context, so 'paper' is more appropriate.

× Umm. I prefer making a list on a paper instead of dropping it on my phone.

✓ Umm. I prefer making a list on paper instead of putting it on my phone.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is uncountable here. Also, 'dropping it on my phone' is incorrect; 'putting it on my phone' is the correct expression.

× This is because MMM. I did not want to waste the battery of my phone.

✓ This is because I do not want to waste the battery of my phone.

The sentence refers to a present preference, so the present tense 'do not want' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'did not want'.