List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "important need to buy"; instead, say "important items to buy." Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence, for example, "because it helps me avoid missing important items."

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes I make a shopping list because it helps me avoid forgetting important items.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Avoid filler words like "umm" and improve sentence flow. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why lists help you manage your tasks. Use linking words like "because" and "so" appropriately.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make lists at work because, as a teacher, I have many tasks to complete each day. Therefore, lists help me remember everything I need to do.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say "some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or forget to make them daily. They prefer to keep things flexible."

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or forget to do it regularly. They prefer to keep their plans flexible.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be more natural and grammatically correct. For example, say "I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better, which reminds me to complete all my tasks."

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better, so I am more likely to complete all my tasks.

× Yes, sometimes I make lists for shopping because I think a list can help me to avoid missing anything important need to buy.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make lists for shopping because I think a list can help me to avoid missing anything important that I need to buy.

The phrase 'anything important need to buy' is missing the relative pronoun 'that' and the subject 'I' before the verb 'need'. This causes a grammatical error related to sentence structure and singular/plural agreement. Adding 'that I' clarifies the sentence and corrects the structure.

× Sometimes I would make a list in my job because as an anxious teacher I usually have lots things needed to deal with in the same day.

✓ Sometimes I would make a list in my job because as an anxious teacher I usually have lots of things to deal with in the same day.

The phrase 'lots things' is incorrect; it should be 'lots of things' to correctly express the plural quantifier. Also, 'needed to deal with' is awkward; 'to deal with' is the correct form here. This correction addresses plural quantifier usage and verb form.

× So a list can help me to umm, remind all the tasks which need to finish that.

✓ So a list can help me to, umm, remember all the tasks which need to be finished.

The verb 'remind' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'remember' because the subject is the person recalling tasks. Also, 'which need to finish that' is incorrect; it should be 'which need to be finished' to use the passive form correctly. This fixes pronoun and verb usage errors.

× I think some people don't like making this made because they think that they found it's quite time consuming or they just forget to make a list in a daily life and they want to make things more flexible.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it quite time-consuming or they just forget to make a list in daily life and want to keep things more flexible.

The phrase 'making this made' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. 'They found it's' is incorrect tense and structure; 'they find it' is correct. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. 'In a daily life' should be 'in daily life'. These corrections address adjective use, verb tense, and article usage.

× I prefer to make a list on paper since I think when I'm write something down I can have a deeper impression on it which can remind me to finish all these things.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper since I think when I write something down I can have a deeper impression of it which can remind me to finish all these things.

The phrase 'impression on it' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'impression of it'. Also, 'when I'm write' is incorrect; it should be 'when I write'. These corrections fix preposition and verb form errors.