Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, of course, I usually make a checklist when I in the supermarket. I think make a checklist have lots of benefits such as they can help you improve the effective and same time and winning some necessary purchase.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Definitely, I make a list every night for the tomorrow, you know, for students. There are lots of things that I will do make least improve more efficiency, for example, and ensure that I don't forget any important things.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
There are lots of reasons that some people don't like making this. In my opinion, many people think the making list is a waste of their time and it's unnecessary for them to make a list. And many people tend to be have a flexibility.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
For me I like make a list on my phone because I think the phone is more convenient and the paper may be disappear, but the phone you must in your hand. So I like make a list on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题,例如“make a checklist have lots of benefits”应改为“making a checklist has many benefits”。建议加强语法基础,使用更自然的表达方式,并避免重复和冗长。
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go to the supermarket because it helps me shop more efficiently and ensures I don't forget any important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,句子结构混乱,影响理解。建议练习使用正确的时态和句型,表达时注意逻辑连贯,避免重复。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list every night for the next day. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“the making list”应为“making lists”,且句子结构不完整。建议加强语法练习,使用更准确的词汇和句型表达观点。
Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes their time and prefer to be more flexible with their plans.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答表达基本清楚,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“the paper may be disappear”应为“paper can be lost”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用,使表达更自然流畅。
Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always have my phone with me, whereas paper lists can easily get lost.
× I usually make a checklist when I in the supermarket.
✓ I usually make a checklist when I am in the supermarket.
句子中缺少动词“am”,导致句子结构不完整。应使用现在进行时态,表示正在超市时制作清单。
× I think make a checklist have lots of benefits such as they can help you improve the effective and same time and winning some necessary purchase.
✓ I think making a checklist has lots of benefits such as helping you improve effectiveness and at the same time winning some necessary purchases.
“make a checklist”应改为动名词“making a checklist”作主语;“have”应改为单数“has”与主语一致;“effective”应改为名词“effectiveness”;“same time”前应加介词“at the”;“winning”应改为动名词形式“winning”;“purchase”应为复数“purchases”。
× I make a list every night for the tomorrow, you know, for students.
✓ I make a list every night for tomorrow, you know, for students.
“the tomorrow”中“tomorrow”前不需要冠词“the”,应直接使用“tomorrow”。
× There are lots of things that I will do make least improve more efficiency, for example, and ensure that I don't forget any important things.
✓ There are lots of things that I will do to make a list to improve efficiency, for example, and ensure that I don't forget any important things.
句子结构混乱,缺少不定式“to”连接动词短语,应为“do to make a list”;“improve more efficiency”应简化为“improve efficiency”。
× There are lots of reasons that some people don't like making this.
✓ There are lots of reasons why some people don't like making lists.
“making this”指代不明确,应改为复数名词“making lists”以明确指代。
× And many people tend to be have a flexibility.
✓ And many people tend to have flexibility.
“be have”用法错误,应去掉“be”;“a flexibility”中“flexibility”是不可数名词,不需要冠词“a”。
× For me I like make a list on my phone because I think the phone is more convenient and the paper may be disappear, but the phone you must in your hand.
✓ For me, I like to make a list on my phone because I think the phone is more convenient and the paper may disappear, but you must have the phone in your hand.
“like make”应为“like to make”;“may be disappear”应为“may disappear”;“the phone you must in your hand”语序错误,应为“you must have the phone in your hand”。
× So I like make a list on my phone.
✓ So I like making a list on my phone.
“like”后接动名词形式“making”更自然,表示喜欢做某事。