Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I always make lists when I shop and especially before I go shopping. I will make a list at home and it will clear my choice and it's easier when I go to shopping to select different products.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I always make list of my work and it's pretty much working for me. Uh, I make Liz it's because I think making lists of what I'm doing and what I trying to improve it makes more.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
In my opinion, some people don't like making legs. May maybe it's because some people might mess up by listing before doing. And one of my friend she preferred to clear her mind while she's doing her work.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to making lists on my because the most time what I'm using is my not on paper, and it's more convenient that I can bring my phone to everywhere and I can look at my list and what I'm doing right now anywhere as as I can.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意动词时态和介词的正确使用,例如“go shopping”而不是“go to shopping”,并且避免重复表达。可以尝试用更简洁自然的句子表达。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me decide what to buy and makes shopping more efficient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,影响理解。建议注意冠词的使用,如“make a list”,并且句子结构要完整,避免断句和口语化的填充词。可以用更清晰的句子表达列表对工作的帮助。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list of my tasks, and it works well for me. Making lists helps me keep track of what I am doing and what I need to improve.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中有发音错误(legs应为 lists)和语法错误,表达不够连贯。建议注意发音准确,使用连接词使句子更流畅,并且避免重复。可以用更具体的理由说明为什么有些人不喜欢列清单。
Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it can be confusing or distracting. For example, a friend of mine prefers to clear her mind and focus on her work without planning everything in advance.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,影响理解。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,避免重复和不完整的句子。可以用简洁明了的句子表达偏好和理由。
Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it most of the time. It's convenient to carry my phone everywhere and check my list anytime.
× I prefer to making lists on my because the most time what I'm using is my not on paper, and it's more convenient that I can bring my phone to everywhere and I can look at my list and what I'm doing right now anywhere as as I can.
✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because most of the time what I'm using is my phone, not paper, and it's more convenient since I can bring my phone everywhere and look at my list and what I'm doing right now anywhere I can.
动词prefer后面应直接接动名词making,而不是to making。这里的错误是动词+to+动名词的错误用法。建议记住动词prefer后面接动名词形式。
× Yes, I always make list of my work and it's pretty much working for me.
✓ Yes, I always make lists of my work and it's pretty much working for me.
list是可数名词,表示“清单”,此处应使用复数lists,因为表达的是经常制作多个清单。单复数不一致导致语法错误。
× I make Liz it's because I think making lists of what I'm doing and what I trying to improve it makes more.
✓ I make lists because I think making lists of what I'm doing and what I'm trying to improve helps more.
动词make后面应接复数lists,且trying前缺少助动词am,应该是I'm trying。动词短语中缺少助动词导致语法错误。
× In my opinion, some people don't like making legs.
✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists.
legs(腿)与lists(清单)混淆,属于词汇错误,影响语法理解。应使用lists。
× And one of my friend she preferred to clear her mind while she's doing her work.
✓ And one of my friends prefers to clear her mind while she's doing her work.
one of my friend应为one of my friends,friend应为复数形式。且主语是one of my friends,谓语动词应用第三人称单数prefers。重复使用she不必要,应直接用谓语。
× it will clear my choice and it's easier when I go to shopping to select different products.
✓ it will clear my choice and it's easier when I go shopping to select different products.
go shopping是固定搭配,不需要介词to。错误使用了介词to,导致表达不自然。
× I prefer to making lists on my because the most time what I'm using is my not on paper, and it's more convenient that I can bring my phone to everywhere and I can look at my list and what I'm doing right now anywhere as as I can.
✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because most of the time what I'm using is my phone, not paper, and it's more convenient since I can bring my phone everywhere and look at my list and what I'm doing right now anywhere I can.
句中缺少名词phone,导致表达不完整。且to everywhere用法错误,正确用法是bring my phone everywhere。
× And one of my friend she preferred to clear her mind while she's doing her work.
✓ And one of my friends prefers to clear her mind while she's doing her work.
主语是one of my friends,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式prefers。
× I will make a list at home and it will clear my choice and it's easier when I go to shopping to select different products.
✓ I will make a list at home and it will clear my choice and it's easier when I go shopping to select different products.
go shopping是固定短语,不需要介词to。错误使用to导致表达不自然。