List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや不明瞭な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で文法的に正しい文章を心がけ、具体的な理由を付け加えると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to choose items based on my feelings at the moment. I like to be spontaneous rather than planning everything in advance.

Sugerencia: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。文法を正しくし、理由を具体的に述べることで、より効果的な回答になります。

Ejemplo: Sometimes I make a list for my work, but it doesn't always help because I find it hard to follow the list strictly.

Sugerencia: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to follow their feelings instead of a fixed plan.

Sugerencia: 表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、自然な表現を使うことを意識しましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's part of my daily routine and more convenient than using paper lists.

× No, I don't because I like shopping the uh, pick stuff for my feelings and buy things at the point.

✓ No, I don't because I like shopping, uh, picking stuff based on my feelings and buying things on the spot.

The verb 'pick' should be in the '-ing' form 'picking' to correctly follow 'like shopping' which requires gerunds for parallel structure.

× So I don't decide before I'm go shopping.

✓ So I don't decide before I go shopping.

The phrase 'I'm go' is incorrect; the correct present tense form is 'I go' without 'am'.

× I go shopping just my feelings.

✓ I go shopping just following my feelings.

The sentence lacks a verb to connect 'shopping' and 'my feelings'. Adding 'following' (present participle) clarifies the meaning.

× Sometimes I make a list for my work, but it does not work 'cause because I don't like I'm not I'm not good at.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work, but it does not work because I don't like it and I'm not good at it.

The original sentence is fragmented and missing objects. Adding 'it' clarifies what is not liked and what the speaker is not good at.

× I also want person who like who don't like making this because I don't like following following it wrist and I want to leave my feelings following my feelings so I don't like following it list.

✓ I also know people who like and who don't like making lists because I don't like following them strictly and I want to follow my feelings, so I don't like following lists.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear references. Replacing 'want person' with 'know people' and correcting pronouns improves clarity.

× I prefer to make a phone because using a phone is really my my routing, so I don't want to use format lists.

✓ I prefer to use my phone because using a phone is really my routine, so I don't want to use formatted lists.

'Make a phone' is incorrect; 'use my phone' is correct. 'Routing' should be 'routine'. 'Format lists' should be 'formatted lists'.