Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Well, usually I don't like to prepare the list before going for the shopping, but when I go with the with my mom for the grocery shopping, then I usually yeah, I would like to make a list so that I I can buy the things according to the list and it helps me to not waste the money as well.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Absolutely. I usually prepare a list for myself because it really helps me to do my task in an efficient way. Whenever I go for my work, I prepare a list before going. Like I have to do that stuff, I have to do my homework, then I have to work on my diet as well, have to go for The Walking to get fit and fine. So these things really helps me.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
According to me, most of the people like to prepare a list before going to shopping or for anything. But the people who don't like as they are good in memorize the things in their mind they love to have. I don't know the answer of this.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Well, both are very convenient fee, but I prefer to make a list on paper as it's easy for me to write down list on paper. On the other side, sometimes I use my phone when I don't have a paper because phone because but it finds me difficult because I sometimes forget where I have I had written down the list in my.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. For example, avoid repeating 'I' and 'list' unnecessarily and focus on clarity.
Ejemplo: I usually don't make a list when I shop alone, but when I go grocery shopping with my mom, I like to prepare a list because it helps me buy only what we need and avoid wasting money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Improve your answer by organizing your ideas clearly and using linking words such as 'for example' or 'also'. Avoid vague phrases like 'that stuff' and be more specific about your tasks. Also, correct grammar errors like 'helps' to 'help'.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and efficient. For example, I include tasks like completing my homework, following my diet plan, and going for a walk to stay fit.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Try to answer directly and clearly. Avoid saying 'I don't know' and instead give a possible reason. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your ideas. Also, improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity.
Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their mind, which they find easier and more flexible.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by organizing your ideas logically and avoiding repetition. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, correct grammar mistakes and complete your sentences fully.
Ejemplo: Both paper and phone are convenient for making lists; however, I prefer paper because it's easier for me to write things down. Sometimes I use my phone when I don't have paper, but I find it difficult because I often forget where I saved the list.
× Well, usually I don't like to prepare the list before going for the shopping, but when I go with the with my mom for the grocery shopping, then I usually yeah, I would like to make a list so that I I can buy the things according to the list and it helps me to not waste the money as well.
✓ Well, usually I don't like to prepare a list before going shopping, but when I go with my mom for grocery shopping, then I usually, yeah, I would like to make a list so that I can buy things according to the list and it helps me not to waste money as well.
The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'list', 'shopping', and 'money'. In English, we use 'a' when referring to something non-specific for the first time, and no article before uncountable nouns like 'shopping' and 'money' when speaking generally. Also, 'the with my mom' is incorrect; 'with my mom' suffices.
× Absolutely. I usually prepare a list for myself because it really helps me to do my task in an efficient way. Whenever I go for my work, I prepare a list before going. Like I have to do that stuff, I have to do my homework, then I have to work on my diet as well, have to go for The Walking to get fit and fine. So these things really helps me.
✓ Absolutely. I usually prepare a list for myself because it really helps me to do my tasks in an efficient way. Whenever I go to work, I prepare a list before going. Like I have to do those things, I have to do my homework, then I have to work on my diet as well, have to go for walking to get fit and fine. So these things really help me.
'My task' should be plural 'my tasks' because multiple tasks are implied. 'Go for my work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to work'. 'The Walking' is incorrect; 'walking' as an activity does not need 'the'. Also, 'these things really helps me' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject.
× According to me, most of the people like to prepare a list before going to shopping or for anything. But the people who don't like as they are good in memorize the things in their mind they love to have. I don't know the answer of this.
✓ According to me, most people like to prepare a list before going shopping or for anything. But the people who don't like it are good at memorizing things in their mind; they love to have it. I don't know the answer to this.
'Most of the people' should be 'most people' for natural usage. 'Going to shopping' should be 'going shopping' without 'to'. 'Good in memorize' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'good at memorizing'. 'Answer of this' should be 'answer to this'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.
× Well, both are very convenient fee, but I prefer to make a list on paper as it's easy for me to write down list on paper. On the other side, sometimes I use my phone when I don't have a paper because phone because but it finds me difficult because I sometimes forget where I have I had written down the list in my.
✓ Well, both are very convenient, but I prefer to make a list on paper as it's easy for me to write down the list on paper. On the other hand, sometimes I use my phone when I don't have paper, but I find it difficult because I sometimes forget where I have written down the list.
'Convenient fee' is incorrect; 'convenient' is an adjective and does not need 'fee'. 'On the other side' should be 'on the other hand' for correct idiomatic expression. 'I find it difficult' is correct instead of 'it finds me difficult'. The sentence was fragmented and unclear; it has been corrected for clarity and grammar.